Among the Living by msclawdia
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

nmcil
05/10/2007 03:39 am
Great Story - love the way that you used Tara and Xander to bring both time periods together - nice way to give us new characters and still have a sense of the original series -


Thanks. I didn't want to put it so far in the future that Spike was the only one around. I wanted there to be other people there for Buffy. So glad you enjoyed it!

05/07/2007 09:34 pm
Wow that was unexpected!! Great chapter.

Thank you!

jen
05/04/2007 07:06 am
exciting!

Thanks!

Emily
05/04/2007 06:30 am
*eek*

I am waiting on the edge of my seat awaiting the next update. Thank you for this one; you've have some very exciting stuff!

Thanks. I hope I didn't wrap it up too quickly in the next chapter. It was just time for it to be over.

05/04/2007 05:45 am
a new ally gained and an old friend lost. loved the holy water in the sprinkler system. very good read, thank you.

Thank you! I wanted to show how the gang had gotten creative over time.

05/04/2007 04:50 am
Tara had Holy Water in her sprinklers? And she didn't think to use it BEFORE Curtis killed her? That was dumb...so was letting someone in like that. She should have known better, after all this time.
Vengeance Demon Willow is interesting. I do hope to see more of her. Get in her head. I'll have to go back and reread to see if you've told us why she went all veiny, as I can't remember.

Thanks for all the feedback. Willow had a series of failures. She couldn't bring Buffy back, she failed to protect the next slayer. So when she went loco on the Trio and here comes someone telling her how great and talented she was? It was just too tempting.

05/04/2007 04:10 am
WOW oh WOW!!!! Its so breath taking seeing Willow being mean to Tara! you did a great job!!!

Thank you! I wanted to make it clear that the Willow we know doesn't live there any more.

05/04/2007 03:35 am
OMG
Awesome!

Thank you!

smlcspike
05/04/2007 02:46 am
I am confused who died Tara is it. More please.
More to come!

Tamara
05/04/2007 02:43 am
A holy water sprinkler system triggered by magic fire. Unique defense.

Thanks. Xander can be very creative.