Just Pretending... by BloodyTearsOfLife
Chapter: Keeping It Simple

08/20/2011 12:12 am
Her question was met with a thudding answer as Xander hit the floor.


That was truly priceless!

Blue

So good!!!!!!
04/04/2010 02:26 pm
 

08/13/2007 07:46 am
First of all, basement scene... HOT. As in, really hot lol.

And Xander passing out, priceless.
LOL! Thanks so much. I sometimes worry at the smutty scenes.

06/27/2007 02:40 am
I am really loving this fic. You've achieved a good balance with both Spike and Buffy's characters. The premise is delicious of course. ;) Can't wait to see how the Scoobies react!
Thanks! I hope you keep enjoying it.

05/13/2007 01:40 am
wonderful chapter. I really like the way you're slowly developing a relationship between Spike and Buffy. As for the cliffie, simply inspired. You left me laughing. :)
Aww, thank you! I really wanted to make it as real as possible. Hehe! Glad I could make you laugh. =)

05/12/2007 02:35 pm
lol....i actually feel just the eensiest bit sorry for xander... :P what a shock :P but mostly it's just sheer glee at imagining the looks on their faces when the "marriage" was outed so completely...wonder how buffy and spike will pull this off, and i really hope none of the others mess it up in their utter cluelessness :P great chapter, love, very much looking forward to more :)
LOL! I hope everyone got that image of everyone being dumbfounded. New chapter should be up shortly.

05/11/2007 03:47 am
uh oh. I don't think the social worker is going to react well to this...
Hehe, you wouldn't be wrong.

05/10/2007 07:06 am
Not sure how I missed this before, but I just read through all seven chapters. What an awesome beginning! The premise is cute, and you do a great job mixing the funny with the sexy. The Buffy/Spike interactions are hot, but the emotions are well done, too. And Xander fainting - too funny! :) Looking forward to keeping up with this one.
Wow! Thanks for taking the time to read all that in one sitting. So glad to hear you're enjoying it. =)

05/10/2007 04:54 am
very enjoyable read, thank you. the buffy spike banter is fun. can you just leave xander passed out on the floor for the rest of the read?
Thanks! So glad you're enjoying.

Hehe! I would if I could.

05/10/2007 01:28 am
I was happy to see the update to bad school is being so tugh, but that's a good thing. Higher education, yay. Great update too. Liked the enteraction between Buffy and Spike and how she did admit that she likes him, but she;s going to take it slow, darn, lol. As for Xander passing out ROFL. But I'm happy she didn't get a chance to lie about whats going on between them and keep Spike in the dark, now she'll have to explain it to everyone. BTW, loved the niceness between them as well.
Thanks GB. And don't worry. Remember, things don't always turn out as planned, especially when it comes to any plan involving Spike. And the truth was bound to come out sometime, I figured it was just funner this way. Glad you're enjoying. =)

Bridget
05/09/2007 07:47 pm
Great chapter. It was funny when Xander hit the floor. Please update soon.
Thank you! I'll try my best to update soon.

05/09/2007 05:59 pm
Buffy should know that her life isn't simple. And what a way for the Scoobs to find out about Spike and Buffy. Just too funny.
Hey, she can dream, right? ;-) I thought it was fun.

05/09/2007 12:02 pm
Yup, love it when Xander thuds on the floor. So much for keeping it quite for now. Spikes going to love this, so is Giles. Thanks for the update.
Well, I was thinking maybe Giles but he gets abused too much. Xander deserves it. You know Spike is going to love this. =)

05/09/2007 06:57 am
Dammit... but Xander fainting... can he do that more often? hehe
Hehe, maybe. ;-)

kim
05/09/2007 04:14 am
HA ha ha! Xander's such a wuss, the jerk.

Oh, boy....the social worker came with Dawn....
Hehe! I think I may have been too harsh on Xander....not! *g*

Yup, the crazy stuff is about to happen.

Cas
05/09/2007 03:34 am
Great way to end the chapter! Of course we all want more now. If you give a mouse a cookie...
Hehe! I thought so too!

I know, I know. I'm working on it as fast as I can.

Sam
05/09/2007 02:08 am
grr, stupid buffy. spike's right, she always has to make everything so difficult. she should have just told them about it before something like that could happen. it really annoys me that she constantly worries about what her friends think, like they always make the right choices. i really hope she gets over that soon and realizes that spike is the one she wants, before he really has enough and leaves town.
Hehe! That's classic Buffy. I think Buffy may value her friends' opinion too much and hopefully I'll be able to make her character see that that's not always the best. Hope you stick with this fic. :-)

05/09/2007 12:46 am
Gawd -- that's torn it! Spike had better come up with some brilliant explaining! Fun chapter.
I'm a little confused by your review because I'm not sure what Spike has to explain, but glad you thought it was a fun chapter. :-)

05/09/2007 12:30 am
ROFL - good thing Spike got those papers filed! I'm glad you are continuing this fun fic.
Yes, sometimes our boy does think ahead. Yup, I don't have any plans of stopping this fic. Just RL and school contraints to deal with.

05/09/2007 12:08 am
Love Xander fainting!
Hehe me too!