Dark Reflection by daniel_nieves
Chapter: Stricken

06/08/2007 02:51 am
Very exciting writing.

05/21/2007 04:08 am
Is there not a huge moral discrepency with a doctor making sure a vampire lives. Vampires kill people, Doctors heal. Plus its bad for the doctors business, with the sucking people dry and fewer patients. But I digress. The story is phenomenal. Post the next chapter soon.
well if Dr. Harrison healed Spike, it might be because he might know. But i digress Toshi, ch 4 should be up tommorow hopefully.

05/17/2007 05:52 am
i'd really like to see spike settle warren, but that would reinforce buffy's soul/no soul garbage, i mean argument. very good read, thank you.

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05/17/2007 03:52 am
still lookin' good...i want an explanation as to how and why the doctor knows who spike is, why he would treat him {if they know about vampires then they probably wouldn't like them, right?), and how the hell did they know about the chip?...oooohhh, please make warren suffer...i think buffy could do some serious damage if she put a little effort into it...bring on the buffy horror!

05/16/2007 07:54 pm
Great chapter.

05/16/2007 05:49 am
oh dear...

05/15/2007 11:58 pm
Wow, now that's a first! I've never heard Tara swear like that before. Very refreshing to have the medical personal of SunnyD aware of it's "other" residents. Hope you tell us how Dr. Harrison, knows of Spike and his chip? Sorry your muse is giving you a hard time. Bring him down here to Disney World and take him up to Space Mountain. Sometimes honey works better since beating hasn't worked yet. Ha ha!
Ill give an explanation to Dr. Harrison and such in chapter five. Next chapter isn't gonna have him in it. My muse submitted until my will and hopefully you'll see the fourth chapter soon.

05/15/2007 05:29 pm
Woah. Glad Tara's alive at least - never did like the way she died. Warren deserves a violent and self-inflicted death, but guessing from the summary I'll just have to settle for the violent part. Please repair Spike's face quickly!

05/15/2007 04:24 pm
wow...things are getting more intense...hope warren doesn't get the chance to do anymore damage... :P

05/15/2007 12:13 pm
This is interesting. I like the way you've played it out. More, soon, please?