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Other Things the Road to Hell is Paved With by Eowyn315
Chapter: Warning Signs
06/20/2007 06:23 am
Wonder what's this all about and the man from the Magic Box. Wished I could read more but I've got another Dr.s appt, I hope to go straight home after, this time around. Very excited to catch up, thanks sweetie.
Hope all goes well with the dr's appointment! Thanks for using your spare time to catch up on my stories!
06/01/2007 03:45 am
Oh boy! Big fight. Glad to see Buffy is a little bit miserable.
Yeah... she's not totally cold-hearted about Spike... just confused.
05/22/2007 04:06 am
what a way to start a sequel. evil cliffie with dawn and spike surrounded. good read, thank you.
Yep, I'm all about the evil cliffies. :) Thanks for the review!
05/21/2007 01:02 pm
I am so happy to see this continue, but I do feel so bad for Spike. At some times I do feel some empathy for Buffy. I just think that they would be stronger together. And somehow Dawn has been put in the middle of them. Really hope that Spike can get Dawn to safety even with them being surrounded. Awesome chapter.
Thanks for the review! They are definitely stronger together, but it'll take some time for them to get there. And yeah, Dawn is almost like a child of divorced parents (again).
time of change
05/20/2007 03:10 pm
Eeep! Great first chapter.
Thanks for the review!
05/20/2007 01:48 am
Great start to the new story. I'm going with everyone else in assuming that David is suspicious, but I can't wait to see how that will pan out. You're known for the evil red herrings, after all. :P
Well, yeah, he is suspicious. It's hard to introduce anyone new in Buffy stories without them being suspicious... everyone thought Jacob was evil, too. But I've noticed that, on the show, they rarely keep the identity of the "big bad" a secret - we always know who the season-long villain is, and what they want, even if the Scoobies don't. But I've definitely got a twist in mind, just to keep you on your toes. :)
zanthinegirl
05/20/2007 01:28 am
Woo-hoo-- We have sequel! Wow, you're fast! No complaints here though; and I'm hooked already!
David is intriguing, though sadly probably evil. And the vamps in the bushes? Yikes! Way to start out with a bang!!
::buckles in for a nice long ride::
David is intriguing, though sadly probably evil. And the vamps in the bushes? Yikes! Way to start out with a bang!!
::buckles in for a nice long ride::
Yeah, this one's going to be intense for a while, then we'll settle down for a bit until the big finish (which will lead into the next story... lol). :) Thanks for the review!
05/20/2007 12:23 am
Oh oh! Nice lead in to this part of the story. Intriguing new player on the block with the sorcerer David. Clem's warning was a bit of a chill...got a feeling things are going to get May hot in Sunnydale soon.
Kathleen
Kathleen
Heh... "May hot" - but it's only November. This story will feature Thanksgiving, and I plan to have the demon mystery wrapped up by Christmas, so the Hellmouth's on a bit of an accelerated pace. :) Maybe I'll have some new evil cooking for May.
05/19/2007 09:30 pm
well, going by the summary, i'm guessing its a good thing that dawn is with him, because when this fight goes badly, at least someone will know that spike's in trouble and be able to help him...i'm so glad you've started this fic so soon, i've been looking forward to reading it :) excellent start so far, love :) more soon please????
Hmm... wise guess you have there. Of course, maybe that's all part of the evil plan... Thanks for the review - glad you're enjoying it.
Mark Evans
05/19/2007 07:18 pm
Yay!!!! It's the sequel!!! Yet another great chapter. I know people are hating Buffy right now, but I honestly can't help but feel sorry for both her and Spike. She kind of has a right to be worried about her dreams, when they do come true, then end to turn out badly. I can't wait to read more.
Yeah, I feel the same way - Buffy has a reason to be worried. But they tapped into something that night, and she can't ignore her feelings for Spike, so I don't think she'll be able to stay away for too long. :)
nmcil
05/19/2007 04:26 pm
great to see the new sequel started -
Thanks! Glad you like it.
05/19/2007 03:55 pm
This isn't looking too good.
Graet chapter, looking forward to more.
Graet chapter, looking forward to more.
Well... it's Sunnydale, it's never looking very good. :)
05/19/2007 03:22 pm
Oh, beginning with an evil cliff-hanger. Good idea!
Thanks. :) I always say, the eviler, the better.
infinitecrisis
05/19/2007 03:21 pm
you done it again! Good Intro and great story!! Suspense hanging for the 1st chapter is definitely a plus! more more more more mroe more
Hehe, thanks. I am a pretty big fan of the cliffhangers. :) Glad you enjoyed it.
lifeisconfusing
05/19/2007 01:44 pm
Great first chapter!!!
Thanks for the review. :)
kim
05/19/2007 08:50 am
Uh-oh.....so from the summary, they take Spike, but how does Dawn get away? And what's the specific grudge against Spike?
What's with the magic guy, too? He seemed...suspicious.
And Buffy's still a moron.
What's with the magic guy, too? He seemed...suspicious.
And Buffy's still a moron.
Patience, my dear. All will be revealed... :) Thanks for the review!
Emily
05/19/2007 08:06 am
Yay!:) I am so glad to see you have already posted a chapter for the sequel. I truly appreciate the dedication.
It looks like Buffy is going to be Denial!Buffy for a while now. *sigh* it looked like she was making progress a while back. I am really looking forward to see more your work, especially the way you describe Dawn/Spike/Buffy interactions... that is if Dawn and Spike aren't brutally killed soon..
It looks like Buffy is going to be Denial!Buffy for a while now. *sigh* it looked like she was making progress a while back. I am really looking forward to see more your work, especially the way you describe Dawn/Spike/Buffy interactions... that is if Dawn and Spike aren't brutally killed soon..
Ha! No plans to brutally kill anyone, but imminent peril is always fun for a while. :) Plus, wouldn't be very Spuffy if Spike died in chapter 2... Thanks for the review!
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