Love it when a Xander comes to his senses, even if it is for a short time. He did keep his wits about him and get Spike. Nothing all along that Dawn was going to die, didn't make it any easier thou. Of course the slayer would emerge, great work. Now to see what else happens, thanks.

Great - buffy on the warpath.

Bad-ass. I like how u show the development of Xander. U lay it out alot better than the show did. Keep the chapters comin.

Glad to see all the wonderful reviews you're getting. Keep up the good work.

Wonderful and exciting start - ready for the next chapter yesterday - sounds likes this will be a very interesting tale.

Sorry to see that poor Dawn has died - but the extreme action reads just right and like what is needed.

Oh, Warren is so going to get it. Buffy will probably tear him apart.

fantastic way to set the scene. very good chapter, thank you.

Oh, my. O_O

Warren's made his last mistake, methinks.

good chapter, love...very exciting and tense....enjoyed it :)

I think this might be bad...