Strip Snap by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 30 The long journey

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05/31/2010 02:59 pm
 

07/18/2007 06:35 am
Hey Sweetie, how was your trip to China? Didn't know this posted until ch.31. Can't wait to see what happened to them and what Dawn and Buffy will do to Willow and Xander, when they confront them again. With William alive and Buffy back, the others have to be fine. Great work, Linda.
Hi, do you have an LJ, Verda? Lots of China pictures on mine which, boringly, goes under the name of Lilachigh! And yes, it was a marvellous, fantastic trip and Borneo is paradise.

07/17/2007 03:25 am
Mean writer. What did you do with Spike and Demon?

louise39
06/02/2007 05:21 pm
Reading then re-reading chapters of this wondrous story.
Starting out with a romantic lake picnic to this possible devastating division.
Loved every chapter. Sorry I took so lonng to comment.
Exhilerating read.
Thank you so much for taking the time to re-read the story. Glad you’ve enjoyed it. I hope to update very soon.

Wendy
05/24/2007 12:11 pm
Argh!!! I'm on the edge of my seat...where's our beautiful boy and his lovely evil demon?

Brilliant story...I've just read it all in one go.

Wendy :-)
Goodness, what a long read! So pleased you are enjoying it. One of my favourites to write because it has come from funny and sexy and light, to dark and angsty! Will try and update soon.

05/24/2007 01:38 am
oh no!! i wonder what went wrong...or maybe nothing did...your characterization of dawn is wonderful, i loved it....she had me just about crying when she was all bleeding and hurting and such, and commanding buffy not to stop :) and i'm wondering if her blood has something to do with it...hmmm....and i really hope buffy kicks the rears of her friends when this is over!!!!
great chapter, love :)
so glad you enjoyed the chp. yes, I wanted a Dawn who was far more like Buffy would have been at same age. I think they got stuck with 13 year old Dawn all through the programme!

daniel_nieves
05/23/2007 09:15 pm
Great read. I love it so far.
Hey Daniel, did you read all the chaps? That is some marathon! Glad you enjoyed it.

05/23/2007 05:54 pm
I'm so glad to see a more mature, useful Dawn. Now if we can get a more mature, useful Xander and Willow.
Yes, like that is really going to happen!

05/23/2007 12:20 pm
I'm so glad William is okay. I can't wait to find out how Spike and Demon fared. Loved the update!
So glad to learn you are still reading the story. I always wait for your comments!

05/23/2007 10:15 am
Brave work from Dawn there -- it has to work!!!
Keeping my fingers crossed. But hard to write that way!

05/23/2007 07:08 am
Yay Dawn!!! Methinks Buffy is NOT going to be happy with her "friends"
I don’t think they’ve been friends for a long time.

05/23/2007 06:36 am
wonderful chapter. absolutely evil ending. thank for the fine read.
so delighted that you are still enjoying it.

05/23/2007 05:04 am
Evil! your evil with the cliff hanger and all the build up. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Can't wait to read more.
Jace
Sorry about the cliff hanger. They just wanted me to stop there. Let’s blame Demon!

05/23/2007 05:03 am
oh man oh man oh man COOL BEANS DAWN!!! I knew she would come threw! Now everyone BETTER be ok I am sure they all want front row seats when Buffy deals with Xander and Willow!!!!!

Please update soon! Great chapter!!!!!
Yes, I hated whiny Dawn along with everyone else, but at same time I kept thinking why does everyone treat her like a baby? Buffy was killing things at her age. And even though she was the Slayer, she was not treated as everyone treats Dawn.

kim
05/23/2007 03:20 am
Hmmmmmm.....

Megan
05/23/2007 03:04 am
Gahhhh, the suspense!! I've truly loved this story and am on tenterhooks to see what has happened to Spike and demon. Wonderfully inventive.
So glad you are enjoying the story. It is one of my favourites, probably because it has changed from light, sexy and fun to something much darker and more intense.

05/23/2007 02:12 am
Oh - I thought this was the happy ending! Instead, it's an evil cliffhanger. Bad, Lilac, bad!
Sorry! They just wouldn’t play nice.

Pin
05/23/2007 01:54 am
great chapter - thanks for hte update. I like the way things are working out, and look forward to someone really taking care of the betrayers, Willow and xander. Looking forward to seeing what happens next (hint, hint).

so pleased you are enjoying the story. Yes, Willow and Xander have got to answer for their actions in some way.

05/23/2007 01:34 am

Excellent update - on pins and needles! Please update soon!
thank you for reviewing. I’ll try and update quickly this time. No more holidays for 6 weeks at least!

05/23/2007 01:33 am
Great stuff.
thank you.

hobbituk
05/23/2007 12:40 am
And you are leaving it THERE???? Good grief!

Er, you will be updating soon, won't you? Did I mention how much I am enjoying this fic? (probably not, I am a bad, bad feedbacker!)
Yes, I am an evil writer! I do like to hook my readers forward. Glad you are enjoying the story.