Other Things the Road to Hell is Paved With by Eowyn315
Chapter: Washed Clean

07/09/2007 01:19 am
That had a sweet and innocence about it, an understanding. Just hope he didn't hear the part about him being "just a vampire," to Buffy. Now to see where this leads...
Spike heard pretty much the whole conversation they had out in the hall... but I think her actions show him that he's not "just a vampire" to her anymore.

Emily
06/12/2007 07:34 am
Gahh, she doesn't realize how much she hurts him, does she?? How much the things she does affects him?
*sigh*
Anyways, very well written chapter. You captured Buffy's confusion of Spike's well characterized reaction of Drusilla's death; and were able to do so without incredibly strange sentence structure (sorry bout that) Great job! I can't wait to read more:)
Thanks, Emily! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate the comments.

06/10/2007 08:16 am
excellent read, thank you. she tells dawn she can't love him because he's a vampire, and then offers him her blood. lord, she needs help.
She's quite confused, isn't she? But she thinks she can help him get better without the emotional part... we'll see if she can. :)

06/09/2007 09:49 pm
Great chapter. I love the changes you made.

Poor Buffy. It's really hard for me not to feel empathy for her here, even when I want to scream at her and smack her upside the head. The scene where she's stroking Spike's hair and sees his trusting, almost childlike expression is so bittersweet it almost makes me want to cry. Very tender moment for both of them and very well written.
Aww, thanks, UB. And thanks for all your input on the scene - I think it's definitely better because of it.

hellbound
06/09/2007 06:47 pm
Really good chapter. It flows really well, even Buffy's jerky speach fits well with the tone. And its so easy to know exactly what Buffy's thinking and feeling just from the way you've set up her words.
Thanks for the review! That's such a nice thing to hear. :)

06/09/2007 04:20 pm
man, the girl is a walking contradiction! she'll stand there and basically tell him, "In case you were wondering, I didn't save you because I actually *care* about you or anything" and then the second after that hurtful little speech, offer him her own blood to heal...
she *really* doesnt get it, does she?
great, wonderful chapter, love, looking forward to more :)
Oh, Buffy is a muddly mess, isn't she? But she wasn't trying to say, "I didn't save you because I care about you" - she was trying to say, "I know we had a fight, but that didn't stop me from saving you." She thinks Spike didn't expect her to come because they weren't on good terms (though actually, he didn't expect her to come because he thought he wasn't worthy of her, since he gave in to Dru so easily). There's always so much misunderstanding between these two. :)

06/09/2007 04:19 pm
Great chapter. I'm curious if Spike will accept and drink her blood?
Just gotta wait and see... :)

06/09/2007 03:00 pm
So I wonder if he will or not.
ONce again another great chapter.
Thanks for the review!

06/09/2007 02:08 pm
It can't be easy to capture Spike's feelings for Dru in later seasons, after he's fallen in love with Buffy. A writer has to evoke such a subtle mix of emotions. You did it perfectly. Very moving chapter, on many levels.
Lol, you have no idea... UB (my beta) and I went back and forth so many times on what Spike's reaction should be. I'm glad you think I got it right in the end. :)

Izzy
06/09/2007 01:56 pm
Dawn has the right of it in wondering why the vampire issue matters. I hope Buffy realizes that as she spends time with Spike. Though I don't want her to forgive him for being a vampire like Riley forgave her for being the Slayer. It's a part of who they are. The vampire had the strength to protect Dawn while Buffy was gone and the vampire was badly hurt by everyone he loved and thought she wouldn't bother to come for him.
I think Buffy was on her way there at the end of Love's Bitch, until the dream set her back. But maybe this'll be a chance for them to reconnect. :)

Pam S
06/09/2007 12:05 pm
Buffy offering her blood to Spike. Sacrifice..

Enjoying
Thanks! Glad you like it.

06/09/2007 11:25 am
Nurse!Buffy is always fun to read, so professional and horrified at the same time :P

What an evil cliffhanger!!!
Hehe, "professional and horrified." Thanks for the review!

kim
06/09/2007 11:20 am
She'll give her blood, but won't......? Damn Slayer....
She's a funny thing, that Buffy...

zanthinegirl
06/09/2007 10:45 am
You know, it probably says very unhealthy things about me that I adore Spike-beaten-up stories! And Buffy is trying her awkward best to take care of him... Very Nice.

And Buffy's starting to come around! Yeah!
Heh... perhaps that is unhealthy... but Spike's so cute when he's all beat up. :)

06/09/2007 08:39 am
Stupid Buffy will let him have her blood but not her heart.....idiot! She REALLY needs to get past Angel! Spike is NOTHING like him except for his diet.

Excellent update.

Kathleen
I think giving him her blood says more about her heart than she's willing to admit. :)

Mark Evans
06/09/2007 07:05 am
Buffy can be so frustrating sometimes. Lol. I realize she's been hurt before, and because of that she's extremely scared of trying the whole vampire thing again. I completely get that, but it doesn't make it any easier not to want to yell at her, lol. But you've just got to be patient with Buffy. Hopefully she'll come around. Hopefully, lol.
Yeah - that's one of the things I like about the character. Even though she's so strong physically, and can beat opponents that are much bigger than her, emotionally she is so fragile, and anyone has the power to hurt her. Thanks for the review!

Mark Evans
06/09/2007 07:04 am
Buffy can be so frustrating sometimes. Lol. I realize she's been hurt before, and because of that she's extremely scared of trying the whole vampire thing again. I completely get that, but it doesn't make it any easier not to want to yell at her, lol. But you've just got to be patient with Buffy. Hopefully she'll come around. Hopefully, lol.
Yeah, she's got a lot of issues to work through - but maybe this new situation will show her a different side of Spike. Thanks for the review!