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Poison by ElizaB
Chapter: Chapter 1
07/13/2007 05:01 am
Oh this is really well written. I like that you're using the same poison that got used on Angel. I've never seen this done before.
07/13/2007 04:51 am
Oh this is really well written. I like that you're using the same poison that got used on Angel. I've never seen this done before.
06/19/2007 03:23 am
way to grab a reader's attention. very good beginning, thank you. be fun to read buffy's pov on the way up the stairs.
Izzy
06/14/2007 10:20 pm
Unexplained, but I'm looking forward to them finding who is responsible for the poison. In this instance, with nothing for Spike to gain in how he might act, I hope the others can see him. A good start that I hope is followed through.
Thanks for the review. Who poisoned him isn't a big part of the story, but that isn't to say it won't be addressed. :)
06/14/2007 05:37 pm
oh no!! i'm already mad at her, because i can't believe that right after spike taking torture for her and dawn, she wouldn't even consider helping him like she helped angel...of course, at the same time, in her mind, angel loved her, and he still ended up almost killing her...so spike probably *would* end up killing her...at least from her perspective...excellent opening chapter, love, very much looking forward to reading more of this :)
:) Well the poison was specific in that they would need to *drain* the blood of a Slayer. We're not just talking a little sip here :P. But will see.
Thanks so much for the review. More will be coming soon.
Thanks so much for the review. More will be coming soon.
Pin
06/14/2007 02:47 pm
Really interesting start. I want to see how this sorts out. Interesting that Spike and Buffy can communicate on such a fundamental level.
Thanks for the review. I think in this situation they would be able to communicate like that because I think they are probably on the same level when it comes to dying. That isn't to say I think they can always communicate that well! :) But there has always been that connection.
06/14/2007 01:57 pm
Whoa - wasn't expecting that! Nice writing. Need more.
Thank you very much for the review. More will be coming soon.
06/14/2007 01:45 pm
omg omg omg!!! what a cliffhanger!! can't wait to read the rest, poor Spike!! I like the way tho that his choosing to go out with dignity, well more dignity then what dying from poison would leave him with...ok that sentence made more sense in my head lol neway keep writing!!
:) Thank you for the review.
That sentance made sense in my head too so don't worry. I'm glad you picked up on the dignity thing.
More will be coming soon.
That sentance made sense in my head too so don't worry. I'm glad you picked up on the dignity thing.
More will be coming soon.
Esther
06/14/2007 07:56 am
OMG!!!!!! NOOO!!! Bad cliffy, bad cliffy!!!!!! This is so good and spot on with everyone's emotions, but I'm crying buckets over here cause I don't want my Spike to die. *begs* Please, please come back and give us more. I beg of thee, please.
Hehe. Glad you liked and thought it in character. More will be coming soon I promise.
06/14/2007 04:28 am
Oh gods. **cries** Fix him! Fix him!
:) Thanks for the review. That's all I'm going to say. :P
kim
06/14/2007 03:52 am
Stupid clueless Scoobies. What part of 'being in love' or 'taking torture from Glory' do they not understand?
So, where's Dawn? I know she's not going to like this plan.
So, where's Dawn? I know she's not going to like this plan.
Ah well the Scoobies have always been clueless about Spike. I think they showed all the consideration they were going to just showing up.
Dawn's around, but of course she isn't invited to the Scooby meeting. ;)
Thanks for the review!
Dawn's around, but of course she isn't invited to the Scooby meeting. ;)
Thanks for the review!
06/14/2007 02:28 am
Off to a great start - I love the silent communication between Spike and the Slayer. Very telling and lays the groundwork for what may follow...or may not...angst is good, too! LOL
Thank you, glad you liked. Angst is definitely good, but then so is happy stuff (what is the opposite to angst anyway? happy?). :)
sandy
06/14/2007 02:19 am
what? please don't tell me that's her solution. god, after getting tortured by glory and this is the thanks he gets? she obviously has no feelings for him at all then, can't even spare her blood but of course angel is okay, big love and all that crap. at least spike would have more control and not nearly drain her dry. i really hope she doesn't go through with it.
Well, like i said to another review- the poison cure is to *drain* the blood of a Slayer, we're not talking a little sip.
Still, it's not always as clear-cut as Buffy likes to make out. ;)
Thanks very much for the review.
Still, it's not always as clear-cut as Buffy likes to make out. ;)
Thanks very much for the review.
06/14/2007 02:17 am
Fabulous beginnning!
I'm glad that Buffy cares enough to be willing to do what Spike wants; dusting at the Slayer's hand is a much more fitting end for our vampire than slow combustion.
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens from here.
I'm glad that Buffy cares enough to be willing to do what Spike wants; dusting at the Slayer's hand is a much more fitting end for our vampire than slow combustion.
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens from here.
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked. And that's definitely what I think, Spike should die by the hands of Slayer.
Also, you sent my acceptance e-mail right? I've tried to fix the things you've said and I hope I have. It's a little tricky editing when it's already on here. I'll definitely keep in mind those comments for my later chapters too (am already editing some of them).
Also, you sent my acceptance e-mail right? I've tried to fix the things you've said and I hope I have. It's a little tricky editing when it's already on here. I'll definitely keep in mind those comments for my later chapters too (am already editing some of them).
Chicklet
06/14/2007 02:07 am
Great story so far. And... can I slap Buffy, please!!
Ahh poor Buffy. Though I guess I see where you're coming from too ;).
Thanks so much for the review.
Thanks so much for the review.
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