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Going Forth By Day by weyrwolfen
Chapter: Chapter 8
08/22/2007 12:13 am
Wonderful description of Anubis' transformation and the conversation he and Spike had. A very interesting developement. Now to read the next two chapters. Thanks for sharing this wonderful tale.
And thank you for reading and reviewing it! ;-)
time of change
07/04/2007 01:12 pm
Great chapter. Your writing, already excellent, gets stronger with each sentence. Your ear for dialogue and pacing is amazing.
I'm glad you think so, even though I bet I have my betas to thank for that more than anything else. ;-) Thanks!
07/01/2007 10:24 pm
hmmm....interesting...can't wait to see as more details are revealed...very well-written, intriguing chapter :)
Thanks!
07/01/2007 03:15 am
Enjoyed the chapter but I'm a continuity nit picker. Fledgling dust? What about the non dusty problem Ammut is causing?
Wah! You just sent me into a panic. The only mention of fledgling dust that I can find is in the beginning, which is a dream sequence, thus no Ammut problem. Am I blatently missing a big boo boo elsewhere? Eek!
07/01/2007 01:36 am
Great chapter yet again!
cant' wait for the next update~!
cant' wait for the next update~!
Thank you! Sorry I'm being so dodgy about a steady posting schedule.
07/01/2007 12:47 am
Excellent update. Love the fact that Spike recognized Anubis by the eyeliner LOL. Very visual chapter...could see the whole thing play out start to finish.
Kathleen
Kathleen
Thank you! And I had to snerk at the khol-covered statues of Anubis as a jackal. ;-)
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