This Time Around by chlarkspuffy
Chapter: Chapter 1: What's going on?

07/29/2007 08:04 pm
Great chapter.
Thanks.

07/26/2007 10:16 pm
very good chapter, thank you.
thanks. :)

07/26/2007 05:22 am
hmmm...wonder why they can't feel their bond...very interesting turn of events...love, is this a sequel to something? because it sort of feels like we're picking up in the middle of the story....just thought i'd ask...either way, it's fascinating...looking forward to more :)
Thanks, DOS. No, this isn't a sequel. I will be explaining the bond bit and there will be flashbacks to the events leading to Spuffy mating. Feel bad that I've given the impression that I'm picking up in a middle/end of something. *Smacks self* I hope that when all is said and done, your questions will be answered. :)

07/26/2007 04:23 am
She knew him well enough to recognise that his stance lacked threat - Poor Spike - no respect.
None whatsoever! J/K. This is a future, more mature and level-headed version of Spike that Willow's come to know.

07/25/2007 02:12 am
*claps* Is this one where Spike is her father? I hope so, so few of those around. Wait til this Buffy sees what it will be like, if she just gets off her high horse and sees him for what he is!Perfect, pissed and antsy Spike. Love this already, thanks for posting here.
Thanks, Verda. I am going to give nothing away one way or another, although you could check out the challenge criteria, for an answer to your question. :)

Yup, in my mind it plays out perfectly - how young Buffy sees things that could be. Let's hope I can put that down in writing, lol.

07/24/2007 03:48 pm
Yikes! That was an ugly scene Buffy watched in the alley, her inner thoughts as she saw the scene play out were really interesting. The closing scene was great too, loved Spike's interaction with Willow and Dawn. Can't wait to learn more about Spike and Dawn's connection. Good update!
Yikes, indeed. That scene is always painful for me to watch. So, yeah, I projected a little, lol. Glad you like Spike and Dawn's interaction. It's important to me that I do it justice.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

07/24/2007 02:04 pm
This is great, I cannot wait to read more. I will most certainly be looking forward to these updates! Keep up the great and wonderful work,
Jace
Thank you!

kim Adams
07/24/2007 09:41 am
I am definitely coming back to this story and look forward to all updates. I love time travel fics and this one looks to be fantastic!!
Thanks, kim Adams, I certainly do hope you return to it. :)

Anonymous
07/24/2007 08:03 am
I love time-travel fics!
Me too. :D

hercules1991
07/24/2007 05:06 am
Yay! An update!!! This was great can't wait for the rest.
Thanks. I about a week. :)

07/24/2007 01:40 am
Hmmm...Much to think about in this chapter, not least of which is that last line!

Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, thank you.
It was my pleasure, Always_jbj. Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

DeanSamWinchesterfan
07/24/2007 12:41 am
Good chapter.Update soon.I hope Spike finds Buffy soon.Once you're done with this challenge, check out mine,please.

My numbers:
333
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I like the way you write this story,and as it's a challenge, it'd be awesome if you took one of mine after you're finished.
Thanks, DeanSamWinchesterfan. It will be a couple of chapters at least before there is any Spuffy interaction. I hope it is worth the wait. I will check out your challenges for sure once I am done with this fic. However, I don't imagine that will be any time soon. I plan to finish an SV fic after I'm done with this one.

Once again, thank you for reading and commenting. Feedback is of the good. :D