Heartwrenching!

 

I love the connection b/n D & B; always thought the show handled it soooo poorly; you're doing a much better job!!

No no evil writer. Don't let him get Dawn.

so what is his deal??? i'm so fascinated by this story, the concept of spike being bad even with the soul, even if he's not inherently a bad person, is one that's not often explored...in fact, can't say that I've *ever* seen it explored before...this story is incredible and i can't wait to read more :)

Ack! What a terrible stopping point! I really love the premise of the story and look forward to seeing where you take it.

buffy should have known dawn won't listen. will she this time? very good read, thank you.

Seems to me that Spike's the one with a death wish this time. Poor Spike, wonder what he and Dru are up to. Buffy 'n' Dawn'll fix it ;)

That was amazing. You have me on the edge of my seat, waiting for an update.
Well done - good portrayal of the characters.

Oh, no! The things that are happening to Spike...

What a mystery, couldn't stop reading since the first chapter. Well done. ^_^