Very good. . . . I hope that you will finish this.     You premise is one I haven't seen before, and you pulled the story off extemely well.   

Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us.

“Wait two seconds,” she breathed. “Where’s Dawn?”

Dawn popped her head up from under the trapdoor, a smile glittering her face.

“Present and accounted for!”

That girl is dangerous! :)
OK, sweetheart, I've read it all... UPDATE NOW!


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Great!

I was so happy to see this chapter. I hadn't realized how much I missed this story until now. Buffy really could have handled this much better with Giles. Who really cares about Xander. Dawn needs both Buffy and Spike to be there for each other and for her. And doesn't she just show up at the best of times?

No one else is helping Buffy with Dawn! At least Giles is mature enough to realize that she needs some one's help, to bad the rest of them haven't grown up enough to realize it too! Glad Dawn got to see them together, gives her something to work with. Thanks for the update, really enjoying it.

Glad that the story got updated I really like it. It was a good chapter. I like that now Dawn knows abour Buffy and Spike. Can't wait to read more

Ok, yay, for an update! Boo, Xander and Giles are head of the ass munch pack, and what was up with Willow feeling all rejected.

Hello, yeah Buffy know's that they are her family, but would any of them step up and act like her husband? Did any of them step up and really help take care of Dawn?

So, go Spike! He gets a shiny gold star.

Loved the end with Dawn poping up from below, lol. Did she see the kiss? Can't wait for more!

Maybe one day Buffy will grow up and tell Xander to mind his own business.

Whee! It's like that schemer Dawn planned this scene. Fun.

I love your Dawn. She's cute. It does help make her cute that she loves Spike so damn much lol.

so glad to see the update. I'm hoping for more soon.

red's " we’re your family too,” shows why some people do not talk to half of the family memebers. love the last scene, especially dawn's smile. very good read, thank you.

I love this story...I'm so happy to read another update :)

The Scoobies have a bad habit of letting thier twisted sense of morality get in the way of things.

Great reaction from the Scoobies, true to character(s).

Glad to see you update again, I really love this fic.

What is her damage?! Attacking him, now, just because he's in his crypt?! Bitch.

Wow, that Magic Box meeting was a disaster....and the social worker figured out that Buffy hangs out there...is she stalking her? Geesh. They have the worst luck for timing ever.

The Dawn/Spike stuff continues to be really sweet.:)

lol...that made me genuinely chuckle, great little chapter there...very much enjoyed dawn's parts in it, and hope they can make a better impression on social services next chance they get...great chapter, love :)