Other Things the Road to Hell is Paved With by Eowyn315
Chapter: Aftermath

10/22/2007 06:27 am
Sorry I haven't been here lately. RL has had me pinned to the wall for a while now. Hope to be able to read more often in the next few days.

I hate that Spike's having to go through that but it was partly his fault after all. Just got to see if they can get over it and move on. Very emotional chapter, well done.
Darn RL, getting in the way of fic reading! :) Thanks for reviewing!

10/14/2007 12:18 am
strong ending to a very good chapter, thank you. the one thing that might have made it better: if spike would have taken his anger and frustration out and xander (maybe giles?) just kidding. all right, half kidding.
Sorry, I still like Xander and Giles, so Spike won't be taking anything out on them... also, he still has the chip, so it'd probably hurt him, too...

09/13/2007 11:30 pm
oh man, poor spike... :( that was so emotional and intense...i don't blame him a bit for his reaction...buffy can't help feeling the way she does, either...i just wish xander would be a little more understanding...whatever buffy does while under the influence of the poison is totally not her fault, but whatever spike does is his fault because he's a vampire!! that's so irritating!!!
but this chapter is amazing :)
very well done, love :)
Xander does have a bit of a double standard, but I think he's under the impression that Spike bit Buffy on purpose in order to heal himself. Thanks for the lovely comments! Glad you liked it. :)

09/11/2007 04:54 pm
I really do feel so bad for Spike. I know that he is doing the best that he can. And I know that Buffy had some tough halluciations as well. BUT they all need to talk this out.
Yeah, but talking's never been their strong point - or their first instinct. We'll see what happens, I guess. :)

09/11/2007 02:14 pm
OH I hope Him and Buffy can work it out.
Yeah, don't we all? :)

09/11/2007 12:00 pm
Way to go, Spike. Prove yourself violent and out of control. That'll go down well.
Well, it's just his nature... it's Buffy's, too, really. They both feel better when they have something to hit.

jback
09/11/2007 11:18 am
Super chapter ending - I love Spikes violent emotional release, very true to his base nature. Love all the conflict and confusion on Buffy's part, glad she doesn't just snap out of such a traumatic event so quickly, it really lends depth to the event itself. Great writing and voice as always! Looking forward to more!
Thanks for the review! Yeah, it's going to take them both a bit of time to get over this... Buffy's hallucinations seemed very real to her, so it'll take effort to not see Spike as the guy who tormented her.

kim
09/11/2007 06:30 am
Poor Spike!!!!!!!
Poor both of them, I think...

09/11/2007 03:22 am
Such a powerful ending to the chapter! You can feel Spike's frustration and grief.

Buffy is disoriented and was already in need of sorting out her feelings to begin with. This is a major set back on that score and poor Spike has been hit by a runaway train.

All voices in character. Nicely done.

Kathleen
Yeah, it's definitely a setback...Buffy's going to have to come to terms with some things before she's ready to pick up where they left off, and poor Spike is caught in the middle of it.

Thanks for the review!