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Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 14 Points of View
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06/01/2010 02:15 pm
09/23/2007 11:13 pm
I feel a distinct need to slap Shanny silly - how can she be so hurtful to Spike? Grrr. Love the story.
Sorry that Shanny irritates you but fathers and daughters! - she loves him too much and can’t show it. He loves her too much but she refuses to acccept it.
Hope you enjoy next chapter. I hope to post soon.
Hope you enjoy next chapter. I hope to post soon.
sister cuervo
09/18/2007 02:46 pm
Outstanding! A truly facinating adventure and one I hope will be continued.
thank you so much. Not too many people are reading this story but luckily those of you who do seem to be enjoying it. Will try and update soon. If I don’t update Something to Sing About I will be lynched!
09/17/2007 11:54 am
Great update - nice solution by Joyce plot advance -
glad you enjoyed it. thank you for reviewing. Always appreciated.
09/15/2007 01:50 pm
Well, Shanny's introduction into the mix was definitely interesting. The contrast between looking at things through the POV's of both Buffy and Shanny was heartbreakingly fascinating. Neither seems to understand where the other is coming from, and they're both so used to not communicating that they can't fix things. :( The new developments surrounding the twins are also intriguing. Loved the chapter!
thank you so much for reviewing. Yes, lack of communication is at the heart of this story, isn’t it? But then so much of Buffy and Spike’s world is like that. The twins are going to cause chaos!
09/15/2007 01:23 pm
Oh boy I'm thinking her plan to bring them in the bubble is going to be a disaster of epic proportions. It's so odd to see everyone's internal reactions to what is going on, and understand that their confusion about their roles and actions is what causes all the difficulties in their ability to communicate. If they could just be honest with one another it would solve a lot of problems. Of course with Angel and Spike the problem becomes being too honest about the wrong things, as I doubt it helped to have Angel say Spike and Buffy are living in a shack.
Your comments are exactly how I felt when I wrote this chapter. I thought it was essential to show all the points of view and how misunderstood everyone is!
Except, as you say, Angel and Spike understand each other only too well! And I suppose compared to his luxury penthouse with swimming pool, they are living in a shack!
Except, as you say, Angel and Spike understand each other only too well! And I suppose compared to his luxury penthouse with swimming pool, they are living in a shack!
09/15/2007 05:55 am
love it. that should be very entertaining. wonderful chapter and great ending.
thank you! Yes, not sure how the adults are going to react to being controlled by a nine year old!
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