Awake In the Duties of Our Callings by bernadette
Chapter: A Timely Intervention

10/25/2007 08:10 am
fantastic beginning, thank you. nice of fred to pop in for a visit. looking forward to an explanation of the three hearts.
thanks!

10/23/2007 12:12 am
OOOO Shanshu'd Angel??

This is a truly compelling opening chapter. I'm rushing to put it in my favorites so I can keep up.

Wonderful character voices especially Willow and Spike.

Will enjoy seeing what happens now that Fred is in the picture as well.

Excellent
Kathleen
favoriting me is pretty much a guarantee of my eternal devotion :)

i'm having issues balancing fred and illyria, but wish me luck and we'll see how it turns out. thanks for the praise!

anon462
10/22/2007 05:53 am
Excellent chapter!!!

That Giles tried to forebid Willow from helping Angel (and Spike) angers me. I have to seriously wonder about his motivations. Thankfully she ignored him.

Reading of the battle was very intense. Seeing how Willows powers made it possible to defeat the demon army was exciting. Watching Willow and Illyria work together to save Spike, then Spike useing the borrowed magic to save Angel was awesome. So much magic, so much power, doing things that should have been impossible. Spike healed, Illyria made into Fred again, and apparently Angel has a heart beat!!!

Really looking forward to the next chapter to see where you take the story!!!
glad you got so into it. the next chapter's posted, though there's not much to it.
and thanks for the praise!

Tamara
10/22/2007 04:01 am
Great characterization. I'm glad Willow didn't listen to Giles.
thanks! always a major concern. and i gotta say, i'm glad too. would've been a whole 'nother story, otherwise...