Brothers in Arms by Sway
Chapter: Chapter 01

alým
02/04/2008 11:11 pm
great beginnin',love it

ennairea
12/20/2007 10:39 am
I love the whole story, I just had to come back here and comment on the shades of Blade: Trinity in this chapter. ;)

11/29/2007 07:51 pm
What an intriguing start! And I love your Action Hero Spike coming to the rescue.

11/25/2007 06:09 am
Wow! From the first word I was hooked. Your first chapter is powerful and gripping: great Buffy quips, suspense, and a marvelous writing style on top of it all. I can't wait to read the rest!

11/16/2007 08:28 pm
Oh hon! I FINALLY got a chance to start in on this one. I KNEW I wouldn't want to tear myself away so I waited till I knew I could read aklkl you've got thus far.

Wonderful start. Naturally Buffy is not talky girl when she needs to be. Some things never change.

Love the description of Spike and the world 10 years after. Really really good action sequence (hard to do..YAY you).

Kathleen
off to continue reading *G*

11/02/2007 11:56 pm
very good beginning, thank you. have the same question as buffy.

Mr. Chaos
11/02/2007 03:43 am
Terminator-Spike is definately interesting. I like the idea that Spike has evolved in fighting...considering we've seen the Slayers do just that.