Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 15 One to Go

nmcil
11/15/2007 04:43 am
thanks for the update - sorry to see that Spike and Buffy had the miracle child that turned into such a troubled parent-child relationship. Unfortunately, it is very often that ultra high-profile or extremely dedicated to their profession people do have troubled relationships with the children.

Sad, but also kind of nice and interesting, to have be presented with a troubled "Spuffy Children" in a story - hope you will be able to post another update soon -
thank you so much for reviewing. Yes, I’ve always thought any child of Buffy and Spike would have problems,no matter how much they loved it and so would then have problems with their own children! I also wanted to show that everyone sees the same situation from their own point of view - as I suppose we all do too often!

11/12/2007 05:27 pm
I liked the contrast between Shanny's opinion of Angel and Angel's actual thoughts reguarding her children.
You also did a great job with with the Shanny/Spike/Buffy scene, you really made me feel Spike's pain when Shanny voiced her thoughts about Angel. :( Can't wait for Buffy's upcoming reaction to Spike's statement. Wonderful chapter!
Glad you enjoyed the chp. I’ve been trying to show how we all see things from our own point of view, never the other persons, no matter how much we love them. But some time soon, if Joyce has anything to do with it, they are going to have to start working together!

11/12/2007 02:24 pm
What what????? NO please explain!!!!!! update soon! great chapter!!!!
thank you. Spike is getting himself into a state! Insecurity is the name of the game.

11/12/2007 01:28 am
Loved the way Billy bounced off the bubble - he's still just a boy. Great chapter. Buffy should clop Spike on the head now before he gets a chance to think anymore.
When Spike starts to think, things go wrong, a trait his young granddaughter has, sadly, inherited!