Live Things by ya_lublyu_tebya
Chapter: Doing It Right

12/14/2007 03:07 pm
Excellent start, I like your take on things much better. Hope to see more soon!
Glad you liked. Next chapter up as soon as I've formatted it!

12/14/2007 06:35 am
your title says it all. very good read, thank you.
Thanks for reading. Hope you like what's to come.

12/14/2007 03:39 am
Nicely written. I think you let Buffy off the hook too easy though. She needs to suffer and stew.
Oh, don't worry. The road to change is not going to be easy! Mwahaha. Glad you liked

12/14/2007 12:47 am
I like this Buffy! After everything they've been through it makes sense for her to suddenly realize the pain she was inflicting on him (not just physical) and want to make it right. And so perfect for her to realize that she doesn't deserve him!
She doesn't right now...but we'll see if she really can change. Thanks for reading.

12/13/2007 11:26 pm
THat was so nice. I wish they'd done it that way on the show.
Me too. Much prefer my version :-)