One Day.... by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 2 Lost Sheep

11/05/2008 04:47 pm
oh wow.  that was powerful.
 Glad you enjoyed it.  I loved the banner and wanted to write a strong story round it. The time frame for the challenge was difficult but I think it worked.

01/10/2008 12:42 am
well a christmas present of sorts for spike. very good read, thank you.
Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed the story.

01/06/2008 05:48 pm
Very touching, no one gives him a second thought.

12/23/2007 10:55 pm
Poor Spike! This touches such a chord with me; being alone on Christmas, even if you're a "Big Bad", is so horrible! Lovely chapter, going to read next one now!

12/23/2007 02:07 am
Buffy is in fine form. Glad Spike at least doesn't do what he's told.
Glad you're enjoying the story. Final part should be posted today - if Christmas plans don't get in the way!

12/20/2007 01:41 pm
I'm so happy to see you're continuing with this story. :) The Manger scene was fantastic. I loved how the dollars just fell into Spike's hand, and reading Spike's POV during the scene and afterward was also enjoyable. Good update!
Pleased you are enjoying the little story. Hope to have next chp up before Christmas if possible. Thank you for reviewing.

12/20/2007 06:25 am
Poor Spike, all alone for Christmas and he can't even pass the time with a good kill. And he keeps trying to convince himself that the chip is making him change. At least he got a present!
Yes, now he just has to learn to give again. This will be even harder for him in case he is rejected. Our boy doesn't handle rejection well!

12/20/2007 12:33 am
Poor Spike. Trapped in Xander's basement for Christmas when even Xander was happy to flee. Guess when you've tried to kill people on numerous occasions they don't really want to include you in their holidays. Interesting that Spiek thought of the money as a gift from on high for the lost sheep that he was.
I think Spike was putting all sorts of logical reasons for getting the money and fighting any belief in a higher power!

sirc
12/19/2007 10:50 pm
well done :)
thank you for taking the time to comment, especially at such a busy time of year.