Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: 16 Not Perfect

11/04/2008 03:34 am
Poor Spike, angsting for years.  Good thing Buffy knows the cure - a good slap.  Shanny is such an interesting messy character. 
 Yes, sadly Buffy's response will always be more action than thought!  Thank you for reviewing.

BecomingChosenGirl13
07/04/2008 02:31 pm
Exciting!. Moore, Please:)!!.
 So glad to hve a review for this story. I know I am being slow in updating. Been busy writing a story for the Mayor Ficathon on LJ !    Hope to return to FI very soon.

01/30/2008 02:51 am
what a wonderful chapter. thank you.  buffy being more  forceful and honest about her feeling in way i never seen, then you end the chapter with the first slayer "ready to attack." fine addition to a very good tale.
 Thank you. This is an older Buffy, of course.  I think she's learnt to open up a bit more over the years. At least with Spike.

01/22/2008 01:41 pm
Now who could that be?????

Man I can't wait for the next update!!!!!

great chapter!
Thank you. So pleased you are still enjoying the story. I hope to post a little more regularly from now on. Crosses fingers!

01/22/2008 04:09 am
Oh no - something evil at the back door. Loved the Spuffy scene. We see why Buffy has to smack him once in a while. He's a doofus. Loved it.
Evil? How do you know? Maybe it's just someone collecting for the local goodwill shop?

01/22/2008 12:31 am
Wow! That Spuffy confrontation was beautifully profound. Buffy is not a woman of many words, but I absolutely loved how she opened up to Spike... the scene was simply wonderful! The Shanny scene was also great, I enjoyed the insightful glimpse into her head. Can't wait to read more! Fantastic chapter!
So pleased you are still enjoying the story. Yes, I felt Spike had pushed Buffy just one step too far! You really do not compare your wife to your mad ex girlfriend!