nice plot advance - very much enjoying this work -

Buffy is really happy in Egypt this time round :P

I suspect Spike is starting to have feelings for Buffy, but he hasn't quite figured them out yet. Buffy's "he’d rather have the pleasure of killing me himself" excuse isn't going to work for much longer, especially if Spike keeps doing things that seem out of character to the others. I find it interesting that Buffy was actually trying to use the claim to read him almost like she welcomes its presence now!

Riley getting suspicious and paranoid already... and Spike clearly has stronger feelings than he's admitting. Excellent. More please.

Buffy and Spike are going to have to try harder to keep this secret. Just by the way they are acting people are going to figure it out soon. But I am glad that he saved her and is trying to play nice. But I think that Buffy and the crew just accepted him with open arms. Just a great chapter.

I just finished this whole story and absolutely love it! I am sorry I didn't leave a review after each chapter but I was too eager to keep reading, sorry...*looking sheepish*

I can't wait for the next update!

Excellent update, looking forward to the progression of Spike and Buffy's relationship.

Liked this chapter, and that little hint of Spike's changing feelings. Riley's jealousy was interesting. Usually he has reason to, like witnessing the sexual tension between Spike and Buffy, but this is just showing his insecure paranoia or his view on 'hostiles'. I've only got a one-track mind so I only think that this will mean Buffy won't feel guilty when she breaks up with him to be with our favorite vampire!
Nice writing and good work with Riley, without overdoing it like some fics.

Can't see Riley putting up with this for long!