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As You Are by BloodStainedSnow
Chapter: Chapter Two
04/10/2008 07:37 pm
"She could worry about the new evil power later. Right now, she had to get to Spike before he became a “what if” that would haunt her forever."
NICE LINE - very much enjoying this piece - now on to the rest
LOVE your Clem -
NICE LINE - very much enjoying this piece - now on to the rest
LOVE your Clem -
Thanks for reviewing and pointing out what you liked.
04/04/2008 05:36 pm
Hum....could it be the FE perhaps? Interesting development here. Would serve Buffy right to miss Spike and realize what she has to lose VERY clearly.
Nice chapter, good fight scene with the vamp assassins. Clem was on the money. Good voices, imagine Spike will be unnerved by his encounter....and rightly so.
Kathleen
Nice chapter, good fight scene with the vamp assassins. Clem was on the money. Good voices, imagine Spike will be unnerved by his encounter....and rightly so.
Kathleen
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I always appreciate hearing that my characters and voices are working. As for your speculation, more story is coming soon but perhaps not all the answers yet :D
Lou
04/04/2008 11:17 am
At first I thought that really was Buffy at the station and was ready to rant! Nice twist. She's got some nerve to be angry at Clem though.
That would be too easy, wouldn't it? I'm glad you enjoyed the twist. Thanks for the review.
04/04/2008 04:47 am
The Slayer never gets a break. Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next soon!
Thanks for the review!
04/04/2008 04:25 am
Good Buffy-vamp argument. Don't think Buffy would say bollix - sounds a little too British for her. Good story. Hope you'll post more soon.
I don't think it's a Buffy word either, but I was trying to show that her relationship with Spike has influenced her, even though it took her a long time to realize. When two people spend time together, they sometimes pick up each other's getures or phrases, but perhaps that wasn't so obvious here haha. Thanks for reviewing!
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