And the Dream Will Set You Free by randi
Chapter: Chapter Six

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06/27/2010 09:46 am
 

06/05/2008 10:59 pm
This story is great. There's much internal dialog, which can drag if not handled properly, but you're doing a great job. The action sequences are very good, too. It's fun hearing the dialog from the show with a new set of motivations for our heroes. Thanks!
Wow.  Thanks so much for pointing out all the things that you like!  You've really made my day.  Thank you!

06/03/2008 04:56 am
fine chapter and excellent last line. thank you.

Yay!  Thanks so much!

06/02/2008 05:16 pm
Better to realise now than never, Buffy.  I think Riley will be after Spike big time.
Yes, indeed, it's good that Buffy realized it. Riley, on the other hand, doesn't have a clue. *evil grin*

Thank you!

Ivy
06/02/2008 08:28 am
Well gosh who would be in love with that clutzy corn fed boy. He's actually annoying me, I'm gonna go and do some work on the punching bag :D

I love that Spike and Buffy both don't want to admit that they have feelings for each other but anyone else can see that they are getting closer.  Make Riley get hit by a bus on the way over , that would make my day. Love what you're doing with this fic and can't wait for more!!
Hee!! No, there won't be any bus for Riley, I'm afraid... *evil grin*

Thanks so much for your kind words!  I'm very glad you're enjoying it.

Inna
06/02/2008 04:16 am
I love this story!  Please, keep writing... it adds happy bunnies to my day.
*laugh* Thank you!  I'm glad you get happy bunnies. *grin*  More coming shortly.