And the Dream Will Set You Free by randi
Chapter: Chapter Seven

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06/27/2010 02:07 pm
 

06/30/2008 06:17 am
very good read, thank you. enjoyed both buffy's thoughts and spike being able to give riley what he so richly deserved.

Oh, yes, Riley very much deserved what he got. Thanks for your kind words!  I'm glad you're enjoying.

06/20/2008 02:01 am
Nice change on this theme - very much enjoying your story -
Thank you!  I'm glad you like it.

avoidreader
06/18/2008 04:08 am
much coolness.  interesting changes ... i like the nicer buffy.  and i like how she taking time to have a relationship with Dawn ... and Spike is great in this!  Good work : )

Thank you!  I really appreciate your kind words, especially regarding Dawn and Buffy. Makes me very happy. :D

kim
06/17/2008 10:35 am
I love the pace you have for developing their feelings.
Slow and steady... even slower than expected for Spike.  But he'll get there. Thank you!

06/16/2008 09:35 pm
I liked your VampRiley.  Well, not LIKED him, but he was well-done.  I can see him saying that in the show, if he'd been vamped - about Buffy and her undead fetish and that she'd be with him now.
Your description of the nest was great - how nasty it'd be and all.  I didn't see the episode where Buffy found Riley there, so I don't know how it was handled in canon, but yours was very...evocative.
*grin*  That first sight of the nest has always been a strong one for me, and I was trying to bring out what Buffy saw and thought of it all, so yay for evocative!  And *grin* thanks so much for your comment on vamp!Riley.  I tried hard to imagine what he'd be like if vamped in the show, so I'm glad that he seemed to work.  Thanks again!

06/16/2008 07:11 pm
I really enjyed this chap! I loved that you made Riley a vamo and dusted him! :D

I cant wait for an other chap!
*grin* Yeah, liking that Riley got vamped and staked seems to be what everyone thinks. Thank you for your review!

Ivy
06/16/2008 11:38 am
YES YAY!!!!!!!!!! Riley is dead!!!!

And Spike has affection for Buffy. *does snoopy dance*
I love where you're going with this fic and I hope that they get together soon. oh yay Riley is gone.

anyway great update cant wait for the next!!

Hee!!! I take it you're glad?  Thanks so much; it's always great to see such an emphatic response.  And more is coming soon.

06/16/2008 10:21 am
It always bugged me that Riley was just able to walk out of the place after Buffy and Spike's visit.  This was so much better!
*laugh* Thank you!  Yes, there definitely should have been more repercussions than there was.  I'm glad you liked it.

Kristen
06/16/2008 09:24 am
God, your story is so amazingly GOOD! I LOVE this idea so much and they way you are handling it is just perfection.

Spike and Buffy's interaction with each other just keeps getting better and better by the chapter and I cant wait for more!
Wow!  Thank you so much for such an enthusiastic response!  I'm very glad you're enjoying it. More is coming soon...

06/16/2008 05:35 am
loved it!
~liz
Thank you!