I really need a beta-reader can anyone help me out please?
And can someone please tell me how it works?

By thew way i forgot to log in i'm wiccianslayer

see here i am HI !!!!!!!!

Wiccanslayer, here is a good essay by Slaymesoftly on the how to approach a beta and what you can expect from the beta/writer relationship.  www.bloodshedverse.com/forum.php

And here is a list of places you can go to look for a beta. www.bloodshedverse.com/forum.php

One suggestion I will make is try to use punctuation when requesting a beta... any potential beta is likely to look at a request post that is completely lacking in punctuation and assume that your story will be in the same condition.

Best of luck.

Thank  you for the advice.