Here's a website that will analyze grammar for free.  It's pretty good.  It will only let you do a few pieces every day, unless you want to pay.    http://www.autocrit.com/

And, here's a grammar program that's very reasonable and they have a fiction specific version.  I haven't tried it, but it's supposed to be very good.  http://www.whitesmoke.com/landing_flash/en.html

Thanks, tart. Those would probably be good additions to Riters R Us, too.  (hint, hint) :)

There is a distinct conspiracy to get me to use Live Journal and I am an incredible palsy at this.  I will give it a whirl. 

*giggles*