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Feb 13 2007 03:06 pm   #1LadyYashka

I hope I'm putting this in the right place. If not, sorry.

Anyway I have a tiny smut story started (898 words so far) and well to be blunt, it stinks. This is the first pure smut story I've tried to write and it's not going so well. It's supposed to be trashy and filled with clichés and overly dramatic descriptions.

I'm willing to hand it off to anybody who wants to take it or maybe somebody can give me a hand? Right now it just stinks worse than my cat's kitty box. (Well in my opinion anyway)

I would have just left it to gather dust but I was writing it for someone else and I'd hate to leave them hanging.

So, any takers?

 

Tomorrow may be hell, but today was a good writing day, and on the good writing days nothing else matters. — Neil Gaiman
Feb 13 2007 04:55 pm   #2ZoeGrace

If it's supposed to be bad, how can you possibly screw it up? lol.

And I mean that in the sense of "can't everybody write bad?"

Feb 14 2007 03:08 am   #3LadyYashka

 "If it's supposed to be bad, how can you possibly screw it up? lol."

Because right now it's about as interesting as cardboard.

Tomorrow may be hell, but today was a good writing day, and on the good writing days nothing else matters. — Neil Gaiman
Feb 14 2007 03:12 am   #4Spikez_tart

Lady - Don't give away that story.  Put it aside and look at it later.  It's probably not as bad as you think.  You might be able to use it inside a regular story. 

If you still want to work on it, try reversing the characters - so every thing Buffy does becomes what Spike does, or add a third character, or change the place it's happening.  Have some fun.  If it really stinks, you can give yourself free rein to ruin it totally. 

 

If we want her to be exactly she'll never be exactly I know the only really real Buffy is really Buffy and she's gone' who?