BSV Forum - Writing - Beta

Beta - What's missing?

Sep 30 2007 07:31 pm   #1Spikez_tart

I need a beta to tell me what my story is missing structurally.  I feel the final version is lacking a scene or two, or perhaps doesn't have sufficient conflict. This is your chance to weigh in without worrying about all those pesky commas. 

The story is Beer Foamy.  First few chapters are up if you'd like to check it out before you volunteer.  Thanks to all. 

 

If we want her to be exactly she'll never be exactly I know the only really real Buffy is really Buffy and she's gone' who?

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