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Brick by pfeifferpack You did a wonderful job with this one - love how you brought in both the Good and the Bad about her relationship with Giles - it's a realistic telling of Giles and Buffy and their life together. NICE way to bring back the theme of bricks for the closure. I'm so happy for you that you are writing again plus doing graphics now - Giles was such a fabulous Watcher/Father until season 6. I hated what they did to him after that. Thank you. Kathleen Saggit 07/11/2015 09:39 am Chapter 3 An impressive piece that connects the dots, showing just how far Buffy can walk from the Giles-approved chrysalis she was to the adult she becomes. Very good job. thoughtful story. Blue Wonderful! Spike is very wise and it's about time someone saw it.
This reads like a scene that would have fit right in with the ending of the series - I would have liked something like this as a counterpart to all the intended Buffy confused about life, men and love treatment that Joss Whedon went with. Well, thank goodness that fans have Fanfiction and the outstanding FF writers to bring in a different perspective. Jane 04/13/2013 03:32 pm Chapter 3 Aaah, sweet ending full of hope for the future. That was my plan! Glad you liked it. k This is such a wonderful story - love your writing on this one. Thank you! Glad you liked it. Kathleen Jane 04/13/2013 03:20 pm Chapter 2 I pretty much went off Dawn after S7, hope her olive branch is accepted. I think she would have loved to have a chance to mend fences. She was fierce in protecting her sister but always did love Spike. He understood that. I made Buffy "forget" to pass on the message because I think Buffy would have neglected to pass it on....not deliberately just that Buffy rarely thought of others when dealing with her "men". I believe Spike held no ill will with Dawn. He understood her thinking and likely even approved of her reaction as he hated what happened as well. k Outstanding - wonderful to have a new story from you. Jane 04/13/2013 03:02 pm Chapter 1 Great writing, really feel Buffy's disillusionment where Gile's and her friends are concerned. Thank you! She certainly had reason. k | |||
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