The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Three

10/15/2008 08:17 pm
very good read, thank you.

10/13/2008 01:40 am
Darlin' you KNOW I am loving this and wanted to say how glad I am that you are putting it up here.  I understand lots of reasons for decisions made but the readers here deserve a chance to get the best and that includes at the top of the list YOUR stories.  So glad you are making it easier for access.

WONDERFUL story.  It is always so clear in reading your work that you truly love and "get" this pair and that makes it many cuts above.

*hugs*
Mum Kathleen

10/10/2008 11:56 pm
Excellent Story, H - love the responsible Spike and the Demon King set up is great. 

10/10/2008 08:28 pm
Wow. I just read all three chapters in one go. This is amazing. You're weaving this story so brilliantly. More please!

P.S. Glad to see you sharing your fic over here.

10/10/2008 04:03 pm
This is an excellent premise.  I'm really enjoying how you're writing it as well. 

10/10/2008 12:48 pm

Very Interesting turn of events - if both the ring and sword have been brought into this dimension where is the crown?  What happened to Brychantus or The Demon King?  Which one made it back if either? 

Great Update - can't wait to see what Willow's journey will be like - nice plot advance -

kim
10/10/2008 03:57 am
Ah....interesting new layer!
And Dawn is much smarter than the rest give her credit for. I agree with Spike that she shouldn't be coddled as if she's a baby.
If Tara's so worried, why doesn't she go with Willow?