The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Ten

11/21/2008 04:37 am
very good chapter. loved the last line.

AMI
11/09/2008 03:39 am
Hang in there Spike, God this is so sad ;-(
Love his speech about loving Buffy ! He loves her so much and is determined to get her out , no matter  what they put him thru .

Beautiful story , can't wait for more!

11/08/2008 07:37 am
terrific new chapter - this is a splendid story - fine work.  I LOVE your brave and courageous Spike. 

11/08/2008 03:10 am
oh my goodness, i love your writing. its so brilliant. so filled with thoughts and emotions and wonderful descriptions. and have i mentioned lately how much i love your spike? he is so awesome. buffy is the luckiest girl in the world. love the update!!!

11/07/2008 11:43 pm
I'd say Spike has paid in full for his sinful wicked past.  This is grueling and that is as it should be in hell.  I really can't help but hope that Buffy, Giles and all the Scoobies find out exactly what he went through and gladly.

Wondering if he is connecting with the real Buffy...interesting how she doesn't always come when he wants/needs her...as if she had free will choice as opposed to a mental construct.  Then again he HAS made her just like the real thing.

Clever boy has figured out how to remember the important stuff and endure and as you would expect...it's all about Buffy.  He really loves her beyond measure.

This is just perfect...you make us feel a bit of his suffering so strongly it could make you cry.  You really do have the depth of his love well defined.

Excellent as always.  You are so talented!
Mum Kathleen

Liza
11/07/2008 06:35 pm

This is powerful stuff.  You write torment frighteningly well.  Honestly, reading this makes me flood with adrenalin and claustrophobia  - but that's a compliment to you.  Just wrap it up next chapter?  

11/07/2008 03:22 pm
Great job of describing Spike's suffering, and even his doubts with his determination. His talk with the Buffy inside his head was done so well, his words heartfelt and unrefined and raw... I loved it. I don't know how far you're planning to take this story, but now that I've found it, I promise to be on the edge of my seat, with you all the way!

11/07/2008 01:37 pm
Painfully real.  Loved Spike's version of Buffy and why he sees her as she is.  What a shame that the "real" Buffy can't be a party to those conversations.  The things she'd learn about herself and him.

11/07/2008 10:42 am

What endurance!  Spike deserves his heart's desire  - and then some!  Great chapter.

ya_lublyu_tebya
11/07/2008 09:08 am
Such dedication through this torment - Spike really is a strong man. Hope he can get to the end almost sane! Great update, Holly. I look forward to more.

kim
11/07/2008 08:53 am
Wow, his Buffy speech...
Ah, my heart hurts for him........

Shiko
11/07/2008 07:50 am
Yeah, Spike will make another day.... but I won't!! God, it's so sad ;_; and he's trying so hard...

11/07/2008 05:38 am
oh man!  What are you going to come up with for the 3rd day?  I could go into all the this's and that's of what i liked about the chapters but honestly I am not a writer I'm a reader!  I just know I really enjoyed it.  Thank you!