The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Twelve

11/22/2008 02:55 am
fine read, thank you.now on to whateverelse he will have to do.

11/18/2008 10:11 am
Another brilliant chapter!  I'm sorry phantom Buffy has gone, let's hope the real one will come to feel the same.  But what will Buffy's hell be like?  Yum.

11/18/2008 12:01 am
Heartbreaking and so full of love.  He has suffered so much already for the love of Buffy...I hope she is not a total bitch to him (also wondering how much her personal hell might resemble S6 of canon!). 

Every word of this one is so well crafted for maximum emotional punch.  You are really coming into your own with this one (okay...you have several standouts from a body of work anyone would be proud of).  You make us feel his hope in the midst of his pain, his resignation to not being loved in the face of his heroic actions as well.

I am so glad YOU are writing this story as you always treat BOTH these characters with such loving care, never casting either as unworthy or unlikeable.  I know that no matter what is happening in Buffy's world you will cause us to feel for her.  Clearly you love BOTH of them as do I.

Wish Tara would whip up some spell that would make those idiots see what Spike has been through.

Excellent chapter, exceptional story.

*hugs*

Mum Kathleen

11/17/2008 07:30 pm
I just knew it wasn't going to be that easy i just knew it -  I hope we get the real buffy next chapter!  Great update!!!

All4Spike
11/17/2008 06:33 pm
Your imagery is very powerful and very beautiful. It emphasises the depth of strength in Spike, the supreme force of will that is derived from his love for Buffy. I do hope he can find her soon...  and that she'll welcome him.

AMI
11/17/2008 04:44 pm
Amazing chapter , loved it .. liked the Buffy convo and goodbye ,that was sweet.

Now onto Buffy's hell *shudders*

More soon please and Happy Anniversary!  :)

nikki c.
11/17/2008 10:34 am
Oh, what a cliffy! This is such a truly unique story. Thank you for sharing it and I eagerly await the next installment!

kim
11/17/2008 09:02 am
Ah, end of the section, and on to the new. And probably not to nice. ;)  Nice touch, having her say goodbye in his head.

ya_lublyu_tebya
11/17/2008 09:00 am
Yay!! He made it! Hope the real Buffy hasn't completely lost it. Look forward to the next update.

11/17/2008 07:52 am
thanks for the update - working it into your busy schedule and special time. 

Wonderful description of his physical environment and his unending devotion to his cause - really like how you use Buffy as his anchor -

the banner looks nice - very pleased that you were able to use it -

Happy Anniversary -

FoolForLove
11/17/2008 07:23 am
Eeee! Beautiful update! (and happy anniversary)