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We Will Remember Them by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 8 Not Cricket
01/19/2009 11:49 pm
now we can rage at being betrayed to the mixture of emotions bombarding the slayer. very good read, thank you.
01/10/2009 02:37 am
Apt title for this chapter!
sirc
12/06/2008 02:09 pm
Well done!
Thank you.
Arielle
11/30/2008 11:11 am
OMG you can't just post a couple of chapters and then leave me like this!
anyway, the story is just great :D
can we have a chapter where Buffy goes all hard core killer? She's not doing nearly as good as she should!!
anyway, the story is just great :D
can we have a chapter where Buffy goes all hard core killer? She's not doing nearly as good as she should!!
Well, you have got 8 chapters so far! Chapter 9 should be along some time this week. i do appreciate that Buffy is not being particularly Slayerish at the moment, but don't forget what she always says - she fights and kills vampires and demons, not human beings. Remember her crisis when Faith killed the Mayor's assistant by mistake? She is in the middle of a serious war situation but feels unable to kill soldiers, regardless of her knowledge of the situation. I actually feel quite sorry for her. Do you see what I mean?
Arielle
11/29/2008 04:56 pm
More damnit! I want more! Great story! Brilliant!!!!
Thank you so much! Always nice to get reviews from people who have just found a story of mine!
11/20/2008 04:09 am
You’re giving me the creeps. I’m going to stink of Slayer for weeks.”
LMAO. Spike is just great, as nasty as he can be. Just the way I love him.
LMAO. Spike is just great, as nasty as he can be. Just the way I love him.
Must admit it is refreshing writing this Spike and not the love lorn Season 5/6/7 i usually attempt to portray!
11/19/2008 03:16 pm
omg update soon i love it
So pleased you are still enjoying the story. Hope to update soon. Must do next chp of BAU first!
IT
11/18/2008 10:32 pm
Oh, dear. What now?
I love Dorcus. She reminds me a bit of Mad Madame Mim, the witch in Disney's Sword in the Stone. She has shades of Agnes, too, but much less concerned with her appearance! :)
Thanks for the update.
What now indeed! Betrayal, a lover who doesn't love her - well, so far! - and a witch whose spells might not always work. Oh plus the Third Reich, a runaway Slayer and a baby. Hmmm, this short story sort of grew wings.
11/18/2008 10:04 am
Let's hope Dorcas comes up with the goods!
Dorcas Twigg can always be relied on to come up with some plan. A good plan. Now, where have we heard that before?
11/18/2008 10:03 am
The moment Buffy took to ponder whether she wanted to go home or not was so bittersweet, :( I'm glad Giles is working on a way to help her. Loved the Dorcas/Giles scene, I think Dorcas is a great addition to the story. :) Fantastic update!
Thanks for reviewing. Glad you like Dorcas. I think she might be important! Now she has to decide what to do in 1943.
kim
11/18/2008 04:07 am
And now she finds out she's been tricked.
Absolutely. It's going to be interesting.
All4Spike
11/18/2008 02:51 am
Buffy asks a good question. how come Spike didn't recognise her at the Bronze that first night? has she already changed the future? Have you figured out how to avoid the paradox yet? ;)
Now Buffy knows Giles lied to her. She's not going to be a happy bunny, is she?
Now Buffy knows Giles lied to her. She's not going to be a happy bunny, is she?
Not happy bunny? I think that's an understatement. Now she has to decide what to do in 1943. Have I worked out the paradox? Well.....
11/18/2008 12:56 am
And so she discovers the betrayal. Poor Buffy was so often betrayed by others in the disguise of "greater good". I don't know if she will easily forgive Giles for this one.
Interesting about being more emotionally whole there. Hope she figures out her feelings before returning and also hope she puts her friends in the PROPER place in her life and that is not deciders (to use a word my current and soon to be former President uses often).
Excellent. Really enjoying this and love your witch very much.
Glad Rupert is at least trying to do right by Buffy. Maybe he'll feel enough remorse to actually accept her feelings for Spike.
Kathleen
Interesting about being more emotionally whole there. Hope she figures out her feelings before returning and also hope she puts her friends in the PROPER place in her life and that is not deciders (to use a word my current and soon to be former President uses often).
Excellent. Really enjoying this and love your witch very much.
Glad Rupert is at least trying to do right by Buffy. Maybe he'll feel enough remorse to actually accept her feelings for Spike.
Kathleen
At the moment she is being betrayed on all sides and perhaps, deep down, she will never forget. Of course, that applies to other feelings as well!
Glad you like Dorcas Twigg. Now how can i get her to meet Agnes?
Glad you like Dorcas Twigg. Now how can i get her to meet Agnes?
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