Running Wild by dreamweaver
Chapter: Chapter 5

11/30/2008 01:46 am
That's was wonderfully creepy and scary.  Can't wait for Serrai to "attempt" Spike.  LOL
Thank you!  It's the first time I tried a scary scent and I'm so glad it was successful!

11/29/2008 09:21 pm
Just caught up on the last few chapters.  Excellent.  This is one wonderfully well-written fic.  It just keeps getting better.  I've fallen in love with the way you've managed to keep your characterizations on track and so consistent with what we know of the characters.  As for your original characters, they're very intriguing and play off the main characters very well.  I just love the flashes of jealousy that Serrai is bringing out in Buffy.  I foresee a lovely little conflict ahead.  Lots of action, intriguing drama, interesting charaterizations, an original setting, and a nice, fast moving plot.  Yep, I am absolutely smitten with this fic. 
Oh, thank you so much!  I love these characters and am so glad to hear that I'm getting them right.  I see this all as a movie playing inside my head and just have to write down what I see.  Writing Spuffy is a fun way of learning the craft.  Thank you so much for liking it!

11/29/2008 07:32 am
Here comes the green eyed monster......
Competition always makes one focus, right?

fangfaceandrea
11/29/2008 03:05 am
LOL on the ending. jealous Buffy is entertaining.
Knowing that there's competition might wake her up.  Thank you for liking it!

Sandra
11/29/2008 02:25 am
AWESOME!!  Can't wait for more!  Thank you, 
Thank you!  I'm so glad you like it!  More coming.

Tamara
11/29/2008 01:23 am
Yay for Anya ! You go Girl! I always thought it didn't make sense that Anya was supposed to keep her mouth shut about the majority of her life.

Methinks Buffy is getting jealous.I think it'll do her good.
That got me too - Anya couldn't talk about 99% her life, just because she had been a demon for most of it.  Jealousy should wake Buffy up. :D  I'm so glad you're liking this!

Flames to dust
11/29/2008 01:02 am

Spike, the scout leader. Who needs Golden Stars? n.n
The travel across the woods were amazing. So 'Predator'. And then, Spike playing with the fluffy kitty.
Jealousy is so Good for Buffy and...well, why Spike can´t have a shag moment with this Hot Serrai?!?
Too much for Buffy?

...only a scratch?...that´s a shame...a little more pain for Xander soon?

Your writing skills are awesome!! Makes to wish for more chapters...one by day?...seems little.

TBC
Oh yes...Pretty Please!!!

I was thinking of 'Predator' too!  More pain for Xander coming.  Thank you so much for liking my work!

11/29/2008 12:36 am
Great chapter, just keeps getting more interesting every chater.
Oh, thank you!  I hope you'll like the rest too!

polly
11/28/2008 11:15 pm
Oh,good thing Buffy doesn`t care about Spike isn`t it , or she might seem a tad jealous!!!
Thank you for the quick updates, I`m really enjoying this.
Serrai being around is going to get her thinking.  Thank you for liking this!

kamw
11/28/2008 11:00 pm
Ooooooh! Good Chapter. Jealousy is always fun.
I just wish Xander could be occasionally greatful.
He has to grow up first. :D  I'm so glad you like this!  Thank you!

11/28/2008 10:35 pm
I love jealous Buffy! An excellent update. You have a real knack for writing this particular Spuffy dynamic.
Thank you!  I'm so glad you're liking this!  I love exploring the Spuffy relationship!