Running Wild by dreamweaver
Chapter: Chapter 10

Jags
11/21/2013 10:38 pm
Wonderful
Thank you!

04/23/2013 11:28 pm

Super Great to read this story again - Too bad that you don't do original work based on this dimension.  Even without the more Buffyverse character; with just Anya, you have a great world and characters to work with.    

I am planning to do a couple of novels set in this dimension.  I need to do a couple more novels set in our world to establish my bunch of Shifters here, then I’ll get them to cross over into the other world.  I think people might enjoy reading about the other dimension. :)

freydis
11/21/2011 08:10 pm
I love this story.  I like both your alternate dimension stories, but I think I like this more because of the Quenya.  You have a great talent for creating believable other worlds with interesting characters who really feel as though they live there.

You also did the BtVS characters proud, all very much themselves, except of course Xander.  I can see why you pushed so hard and emphasized the negative points of his character to help promote Anya's story, but I did miss his genuine ability to care and sense of humor.  I hope you revisit someday and we can see how everyone's doing.
I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  I confess I did push on Xander, but then I don't really think much of him.  So many people wanted a sequel that I mean to do one.  But I couldn't come up with a really compelling idea, so it's kind of on the backburner for now.

Niori
05/27/2009 06:22 am
This story rocked.
The awesomness of Spuffy was great, but not gonna lie, what you did with Anya was my fav part. That girl was so under appreciated! I mean, after how long she;s been around and they never listened to her (same goes for Spike). And Xander was just a jerk to her plain and simple. I have no idea why she even stayed with him. And on that note, it;s mice to see that there is someone else out there who hates him as much as me.
Again, great story and all that!
I could write an essay on all the reasons I dislike Xander, but somebody already did! :D  Anya deserved better and I really wanted her to find someone who really loves her.  I'm so glad you liked the story!  Thank you!

Emma
02/19/2009 08:54 am
loved this, one of the best Spuffy stories i have read
Thank you!  It was so much fun to write!

Lal08
02/10/2009 05:11 pm
Loved it, absolutely loved it. The shfters were great way to express Buffy that everything is not black and white. I was interested in Anya's storyline as well. To show resemblance to Buffy through Anya and Rihar was very smart. Great story...
Oh, thank you!  I had to find some way to make Buffy see, and I really wanted Anya to be loved and valued for once.  I'm so glad you liked it!

01/25/2009 09:51 pm
Another beautiful story.   This world was simply breathtaking.  Your descriptions of each separate society were so complete and so well thought out.  I've read stories involving shapeshifters before, but I absolutely loved the twists you added.  The entire social structure being based on a lion's pride or a wolf pack ... brilliant.  I also loved Rihar and all of your other original characters.  I was almost as involved in their stories as I was in the Spuffy!  And of course, it goes without saying, the Spuffy was beautiful.  You handled their relationship delicately.  I enjoyed each subtle shift from enemies, to allies, to friends to lovers.  Each step of that journey was so well written and wonderfully conceived.  Lastly, I really enjoyed Anya's storyline.  I think her demon nature was something that could have been handled differently on the show.  Spike was always treated as evil and Anya was treated as human.  She was a demon who didn't know how to act, but her soul and her past were just sort of glossed over.  And I'm certainly no fan of Xander's, so I very much enjoyed her love affair with Rihar.  Another fine tale.  Thank you ever so much for sharing!
Oh, thank you so much for liking it!  I've read the occasional story about shapeshifters and it always puzzled me that the social structure depicted was always a human one.  It seemed to me that such a society would much more likely follow the animal side, which is why I based the Quenya society on the way prides and packs behave.  I'm so glad you found Rihar and the others believable and likeable!
The Spuffy is always the fun part and I love exploring the changes in that dynamic, the lovely complexity of it.
It always bothered me too that Spike is always treated as evil and never forgiven for it, while Anya's past as a demon is never addressed.  But I like Anya and think she got a really bad deal in Xander, whose misdeeds (from trying to rape Buffy, to being responsible for several deaths in 'Once More With Feeling', to emotionally rejecting Anya constantly and cruelly) are all immediately forgotten and forgiven while Spike never is!  I really wanted Anya to finally have someone who loves her for herself.
I'm so glad you liked the story!  Thank you!

01/14/2009 04:11 am
what a great way to end this tale. thank you for the fun read.
Thank you for liking it!  And for not getting upset over Xander.  I'm on Spike's side about Xander - really don't think much of him at all!  A reviewer on Elysian Fields got really upset about that and tore a strip off me both in her review and on Live Journal.

01/01/2009 02:18 pm

Loved this story - a great way to start the new year -

Thank you!  This one was really fun to write.

ttygrr
12/13/2008 11:27 am
What a wonderful story!  Thanks so much for sharing it with us.  I'm anxious to check out anything else you've written in the Buffyverse now.

The alternate dimension was so well-realized and *complete*.  The natives weren't just minor obstacles to be avoided at all costs.  You really took the time to flesh them out - the characters and the societies.  I appreciate the level of detail and the effort involved in doing that.
Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  I'm trying to learn how to write believable other worlds and writing Spuffy, which I love, gives me the opportunity to do so.  Most of my stories are set in Sunnydale, but I'm branching out now.  Try 'A Different Light' which was my first dimensional jump story.  My next will be a regular Buffyverse story, but the one after that will be alternate dimension again.  :D

ttygrr
12/13/2008 11:26 am
What a wonderful story!  Thanks so much for sharing it with us.  I'm anxious to check out anything else you've written in the Buffyverse now.

The alternate dimension was so well-realized and *complete*.  The natives weren't just minor obstacles to be avoided at all costs.  You really took the time to flesh them out - the characters and the societies.  I appreciate the level of detail and the effort involved in doing that.
Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  I'm trying to learn how to write believable other worlds and writing Spuffy, which I love, gives me the opportunity to do so.  Most of my stories are set in Sunnydale, but I'm branching out now.  Try 'A Different Light' which was my first dimensional jump story.  My next will be a regular Buffyverse story, but the one after that will be alternate dimension again.  :D

12/13/2008 07:08 am
As I was reading your story, I was thinking how much I enjoyed the sci-fi, totally different dimension touch and how its creativity was so much like that of another author whose story A Different Light I adored so much.  Then I checked back, and discovered YOU are the author of both of them!!!!  I love how much depth and detail you give these fantasy worlds, how realistically the characters evolve and grow, and how you have such great plots.  I also really liked Anya finding her strength and leaving Xander--something Joss never let the poor girl do!  Is "do the running" a Canadian expression?  I hadn't heard it before although it is obviously the same as our "running after someone" phrase.  Love your stuff--hope you'll write more!
Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you liked both Running Wild and A Different Light!  I'm trying to learn how to write interesting and believable alternate worlds because I love sci-fi and would love to end up getting  published in that genre.  I only started writing Spuffy in November of last year and I'm learning the craft by doing it.  You're probably going to find more dimensional jump stories coming up in future.  :D
I really wanted Anya to be valued and cherished for once.  I never understood why she fell for Xander in the first place with his constant putdowns and emotional rejection.
I think 'do the running' must be a Canadian expression.  Canadians pick up both American and British slang, which is useful when writing Spuffy because it's easy to write Buffy and the Scoobies' Americanisms while still being comfortable with Spike's North London accent.  But sometimes I get confused between the two.  I honestly don't know whether 'to make the running' is an American, British or Canadian phrase!  But since Anya would have spent most of her thousand years of life in Europe, I can just call it TransAtlantic and get away with that.  :D

12/07/2008 11:26 pm
I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed that story - couldn't put it down.

So glad Buffy had the courage to find a way to be with Spike.

Thank you.
Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  Buffy is always so brave with fighting, but when she comes to emotional relationships, she always has to struggle.  I think she will always come through in the end when it matters.

sirc
12/07/2008 01:16 pm
This has been a great story. Thank you for writing it.
Thank you for liking it!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

12/04/2008 04:52 am
 wow i coudnt stop reading lol i love how you write
Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

12/03/2008 11:56 pm
Just saw in another review that you are thinking of a revisit to this dimension...YAY...I vote yes!

Anya could come back and ask for help for something and the gang rally to go to their aid (maybe Xander will have grown a bit like he did on the show when he lost Anya and will be decent...maybe even fall for another "demon" as he has a habit of doing....you know that sister of Rihar might just handle the Xan-man! LOL)......just a thought.  Truly, I'd LOVE a revisit as I truly enjoyed this world you created and those who inhabit it.

Kathleen
I was thinking exactly that - Anya coming back for help.  But not Tirr for Xand - she's naive like Anya.  I was thinking Serrai.  Bit of dominance might help him grow up. :D  I really like the Quenya and their world, so I'm definitely going to revisit it.  But I've got to get another WIP finished first, so it might be some time.  I'm so glad you want more of it!

Belle
12/03/2008 03:50 pm
Awwww man! It's over! T.T Great story!! Really enjoyed reading it! Hope to see more of your works! :D
Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  I'm already working on the next.

Lea
12/03/2008 12:36 pm
Thank you very much for this! Your characters are spot on (especially Snarly!Spike in the beginning!), and the whole plot is wonderfully rich in detail and imagination! The portrayal of the Quenyas and the rest of the world could be a novel on its own.
You truly are a dream weaver! :)
And the Spuffy was wonderful as well ;)
I love Snarly-Spike and you're probably going to see him again!  Thank you so much for saying that this dimension and its people could be a novel.  I'm trying to learn how to create interesting and believable worlds and it's wonderful to know that you think I've succeeded!  And the Spuffy is so much fun! :D

jamalov29
12/03/2008 10:15 am
Anya deserved to be loved and cherished like Rihar did in his own dimension so it was lovely to see them going back there together.
Very sweet end satisfying ending , I just like  the moment of awe when Spike realizes that he's loved like he  has waited to be for so long.
Thank you very much for another beautiful story!
You see that awe in Spike at the end of 'Smashed' when he and Buffy make love for the first time.  Here, it would be more because he's finally loved.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this story!  Thank you!

Flames to dust
12/03/2008 09:54 am
Fantastic ending!! (Maybe a bit more of physical pain for Angelus but ... I have enough with his pale face when verifies to who chooses a grown up Buffy) n_n
A naked Spike and Buffy in the bed with this three wallheads in the same room. And a happy ending for Anya too...traduction: a lot of orgasms!! -_-
It´s a pity that´s was the End...or not?
Promises, promises...

Thanks a lot for this awesome story Dreamweaver and waiting for the next!!
Physical pain doesn't seem to bother him much, but the mental pain of Buffy choosing Spike is going to burn him forever!
Perhaps not quite the end. :D  I got really fond of the Quenya dimension and I'm trying to figure out a way to return the gang to it.  But it won't be until I get my present WIP finished.  Thank you so much for enjoying this story!

12/03/2008 09:36 am
Your stories are always so amazing. I absolutely loved every minute of this. Can't wait to see what you'll come up with next!!
Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  Spuffy stories are so much fun to write and I'm already working on the next.  Hope to have it up soon!

lilashannah
12/03/2008 04:01 am
“Buffy!” Giles exclaimed. “How could you!”
"Well Giles you emotional retard,I love him!"
Just what the hell did he think she would do it for? A lark? yes let's bind ourselves to a vamp just to piss of my friends.

Oh and Anya and Rihar.So perfect! Do you think you'll do another story with the gang going to vist? I think I like Rihar almost as much as Spike.(Please note I said Almost)
you got Angel,Giles and Xander bashing in and a Happy Spuffy,Anhar ending. it was purrrrfect!
Giles just can't believe it.  And I love rubbing it in for him. :D
I really like the Quenya dimension and Rihar (I agree with the almost - no one matches Spike!) and I'm already trying to figure out another story getting the gang back there.  It will have to wait though until I get my present WIP finished.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this!  Thank you!

12/03/2008 03:36 am
love it, love it, love it! can't believe its over already!!! great story you have here, through and through. a real joy to read.
Oh, thank you!  Spuffy is so much fun to write!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

12/03/2008 02:31 am
What a satisfying payoff all round.  Gee where to begin....

Love the Quenya view of our society/world.  It would horrify them how we have completely undone the natural order.  See...you made their world so real I could see the comparison right along with Rihar.  VERY WELL DONE INDEED!

Loved that Anya went with him (and a possibility of vacations back with her friends is nice too).  Xander lost her with his inability to accept her as she really is (I never understood why she accepted the BOY telling her how to behave!  She was over a thousand years old and an adult when she was made a demon and she allowed such disrespect! ).  So glad she will be where and with one who DOES respect her.  He loves her too...enough to do the challenge early so he could have her even risking his life.  Anya deserves this sort of love.  We can only hope that in time Xander will actually THINK about all that has happened and grow up (as he seemed to in S7 after losing her that way).

Love the touch of having Angel there to witness this.  Really liked that his reaction (along with Giles and Xander) finally made Buffy realize how she felt and made her look into ways to keep Spike safe.  I believe her that she would ahve let him leave to keep him safe and that shows how much she DOES love him.

Love how Spike tied up the loose ends with Doc and Ben/Glory....in character and necessary.  It allows safety to Dawn and Buffy AND the whole world and Giles and company should understand that in time.

Love Buffy's words to the trio of judgment when they cam in and "caught" them (and how typical that Xander had spurred that on!).  Every word rang true and I am so glad she let them know that the biggest reason was because it was her choice, her desire!

I like claim stories unlike a few very vocal readers but I have to say that in this one, especially, I like how you used it as a PLOT device...not just something tossed in to up the ante with sex or the love story.  She had a REASON for it....to keep Spike safe permanently.  Now the only possible enemy would be the Council who have a habit of seeing Slayers as replaceable anyway.  This made the use of a claim logical and not just "fluff".  WELL DONE!

This really was your best yet IMHO if only for the rich details.  I can't believe you told it all so well in only 10 chapters!  (Maybe I'm too wordy LOL).

Excellent on all points.  I've recommended it on my LJ and plan to at CDS too.

Kathleen
I never understood why Anya stood for it either - her social naivete possibly didn't allow her to see that disrespect or that his rejecting her and denigrating her while exploiting the physical relationship was abusive.  (I was just involved in a long argument about that with another reviewer on EF. :D )  I really wanted her to feel cherished and that someone would be willing to risk his life just for her.
No Glory=no death and resurrection=no First Evil.  I wanted to tie up those loose ends.  Plus Spike will be around to possibly be aware of Joyce's aneurysm in time and keep her from dying.  One reviewer said Spike's taking out Doc and Ben seemed rushed, but Spike would be very direct about it and I couldn't find any way to stretch it out without going out of character.
I've always seen the claim as a way to keep Spike safe, but this story allowed for it to be a plot device, for which I was very happy.
I'm so glad you liked this world!  The temptation always exists to be over-elaborate about the details, but I try to keep it as tight as possible.  My mantra always is:  condense to give it power.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this!  It's wonderful when people like my stories!  Thank you!

Leilani
12/03/2008 12:57 am
You are fast becoming one of my favorite authors - I love that when you start a story you just keep chugging the chapters out until its done.  And the stories you tell are always so wonderful and full.  Well developed characters - interesting plot twists and engaging dialogue.

Please keep up the good work - this story was AWESOME!
I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  I know how frustrating it is as a reader to have to wait for chapters and often not even know if the story will ever be completed.  So I don't start posting until the story is finished and all that has to be done is clean it up.

Tamara
12/03/2008 12:47 am
First rate ending! I love how Rihar risked his life so he could be with Anya and only Anya. I don't think she'll be coming back .

Great move having Buffy be the one to think up them mating. I love how she stood up to the 3 killjoys too.
Anya needed to have someone prove to  her that she mattered, someone who will actually cherish her.  I wouldn't come back. :D  Buffy had something to prove too to Spike.  I'm so glad you liked the story!  Thank you!

laura
12/03/2008 12:03 am
Enjoyed your story
Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!

12/02/2008 11:54 pm
Yay, two happy endings. Very nice.
Love it when everything turns out to be all fluffy Spuffy.
You almost made me get all watery eyed when Buffy told Spike she loved him.
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  Someone said I should try a tragic ending sometime, but I just can't bring myself to do it.  I'm a hardcore fluffy Spuffy girl!  :D

12/02/2008 11:49 pm
Great story. The last chapter seemed a bit rushed imo but still good. Only disappointing thing is it's all over =( but id definitely read again at a later time.
I was worried that it would seem a little rushed.  But Spike would go straight to the point, so there was no way to stretch out his encounters with Doc and Ben.  I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!

duke6665
12/02/2008 11:25 pm
awesome ending. only complaint i have is that its over. never wanted this one to end.. more please??? great choice with anya kicking xander to the curb and keeping the nice kitty lol
I was sorry to end too and now I'm wondering whether there's any way I can set another story in the Quenya dimension. :D  Anya needed to be loved and cherished for once, and she doesn't mind Rihar being a cat one bit.  I'm so glad you liked this!  Thank you!

12/02/2008 11:07 pm
*sighs*  Wanted to wait until the end before I commented; you just get better and better!  I've pretty much stopped reading anything in the Buffy'verse; I've been swallowed whole by Supernatural, but when I see YOUR name come up in my inbox, that's it!  Everything on hold while I read your latest; and my GOD it was worth it!!!  You are totally amazing, and I hope you continue to write Spike & Buffy for a long, LONG time; I can't wait to see what you come up with next!!!  Loved the Quenya, and their pragmatic view of the world; was SO glad Anya wound up with Rihar; she totally deserved somebody who would love her for herself, and of course, thank you so MUCH for the Spuffy ending!!!!!
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you!  I adore Buffy and Spike, so I'll be writing Spuffy for ages.  I'm already working on my next one. :D  Anya really deserved someone who would cherish her and I wanted to give her that just once.  It had to be a Spuffy ending!  Someone suggested I write a tragic ending just once, but I just can't bring myself to do it!