I'm in love with every word. This looks great, I can't wait to continue!

You have such a wonderful writing style and are so creative with your phrasing...not to mention the beautiful, tender yet tentative relationship you are building between Spike and Buffy.  I hope now that BSV is working again, you will post all the other chapters I've seen on other sites here at BSV as well.

very good read, thank you.

This is a scene that should have been in the show.  You filled it in beautifully!

I'm so glad to see you posting here! I think this fabulous story will be well received! Good Luck!