Foreshadow I: Grief, Despair and Hope by Alexannah
Chapter: Setting Wrongs Right

05/30/2015 10:07 pm
very touching.  I like the dynamic between them.

Brunettepet
02/03/2010 01:02 am
Spike snapping his mother's neck was brutal, and his reaction to it was gutting.  It's no wonder Buffy's gut reaction is to comfort the poor guy.  This was his mother and he had an opportunity to save her.  The portal spitting them back shows he did the right thing, but it doesn't make it any less awful.

Buffy comforting him and being compassionate was wonderful.  Her change of attitude toward Spike is believable under these extraordinary circumstances. 

Sunshine
08/22/2009 03:42 pm
This is starting to get really interesting.. will you update the story? Please?

All4Spike
08/12/2009 12:36 pm
 Only just found this story and I just had to say how much I'm loving it. So... Spike's dad is the chap who absorbed the Hellmouth energy? Intriguing.....

Glad to see Buffy   accepting that Spike has genuine feelings and being sympathetic. The beginning of a solid friendship.

08/11/2009 10:58 pm
Oh I hadn't thought it would be so easy to come back. Even if for Spike it wasn't easy, it was very tough. I wonder if the amateur sorcerer is related to William? Than that fact could be important. *just guessing*
Loved that Buffy was there for Spike.

Gina
08/10/2009 06:32 pm
If the seers sent them back to prepare Spike and Buffy, was it just so Spike could find peace with what happened to his mother, to bring the two of them closer together, or for something totally different? You have a gift for interesting, many-sided plots, and I like how this is moving forward. That William/Spike's father was the amateur sorcerer the Scoobies are looking for ways to kill was a nice move.

08/10/2009 04:50 pm
Clearly showing the emotion but without long descriptions of it. Great characterization, and a lot of hints of what is to come. A great chapter. glad you updated.

08/10/2009 04:44 pm
AHA!  Methinks Spike's father might well be the Hellmouth magician! (I love to speculate but expect to find out in good time).

Really excellent.  So glad to see this updated. 

So Dawn and Xander are with Angel and Giles has witnessed a special moment between Spike and Buffy.  This should be interesting.   Glad Spike got a chance to do things differently.

Kathleen