fun Dawn and Buffy chapter.  It was a little too easy though for Buffy to get Dawn to come around.

I really love how I don't have to wait too long between chapters! I loved seeing Ned be, well, Ned with the singing. That was great! I also liked how he was trying to help with Willow, although it backfired. Good to see that he helped with Dawn too and Buffy is being proactive about that! Telling Dawn about being in heaven seemed a little anticlimatic, I would suggest devoting just a few more lines/emotions/thoughts for next time. I really hope that if Willow doesn't clean up her act, Buffy will at least start asking for rent (another thing I thought the series should have done). Any scenes with Buffy at the job? Maybe with Spike watching her? And has Giles left yet? Keep up the fabulous job!