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Could Be You by Abby
Chapter: Chapter Four
Tipsytoes
04/25/2010 10:06 am
:-)
:)
calminthechaos
04/14/2010 05:23 am
Gah! Great chapter, especially the end there! Loved the bit: "He wasn't drowning, he was burning". You write so gracefully and seamlessly!
:)
calminthechaos
04/14/2010 05:22 am
Gah! Great chapter, especially the end there! Loved the bit: "He wasn't drowning, he was burning". You write so gracefully and seamlessly!
Thank *you*! Glad you liked the little look into Spike's head :)
marstersrules
02/01/2010 09:53 pm
thats the way that episode should have ended!!!!!!!!!!!great job!!!!!!!!
I agree! Thank you!
ElyseNotElsie
01/28/2010 05:04 am
Argh, I want more of this story. It's so good and so not finished yet! Please can we have more soon?
There's more coming, honest! Had some real life issues going on but this story will be finished, I promise. So glad you are enjoying it so far. Thank you so much!
BloodyHell
10/01/2009 06:48 pm
More.More.More! :)
Soon, I hope! Thanks!
09/30/2009 01:00 am
All I can say is wow! I don't know where to begin! I loved the line: He wasn't drowning he was burning. I loved every word but more importantly, I love the story that you have created. At first I thought this was just going to smut, but this, this is a work of art! I loved that she and him are incorporating bits of the other, small pieces at a time: the jacket, how she fit perfectly cuddled next to him, how even the strongest fighter needs a shoulder to cry on. I love how uncomfortable he was with her crying! That was just perfect! This is an amazing piece, I hope for many more chapters to come!
Thank you SO much for this review! It's a total make-the-author-feel-all-gooey-happy review. Yeah, there's smut, but I really want to show the emotions at play here and the connection growing between them, so thank you for commenting on that. I hope not to keep you waiting too long for more!
09/28/2009 08:24 pm
Absolutely lovin' it hon. :-) It's giving me tingles of anticipation all over for the next chapter - which better be soon.
Thank you! I'm working on chapter five right now... I hope I don't keep you waiting too long!
Gill Bailey
09/27/2009 11:21 am
This is building wonderfully. I love stories that make B realise how much Spike cares so early - and the sexiness doesn't exactly hurt, either - more please!
Thank you very much! I hope to have more soon :)
Niori
09/26/2009 02:33 am
Another great chapter. I really liked this one- it was sweet and sad. As much as I loved your previous tres hot chapters, this was a nice change of pace. Can't wait for more.
Thank you. I'm very glad to hear that the sweet and sad was as well received as the tres hot...
I hope not to keep you waiting too long. I've reached the end of my fully completed chapters, but chapter five is coming along so *crosses fingers*
I hope not to keep you waiting too long. I've reached the end of my fully completed chapters, but chapter five is coming along so *crosses fingers*
09/25/2009 07:32 pm
Absolutely wonderful chapter. Spike's thoughts and insecurities and even his awkwardness around Buffy's crying, and Buffy's clear feelings and opening to him, and the soft laughter with the aching sadness... It was a perfect scene and so well-written I really felt in the moment with them. The mention of a roadie at the Bronze and a quickie in the cemetery were a perfect foil for the somber emotions about to be drawn out with the news of Joyce.
Great chapter.
Great chapter.
Thank you very much!
I'm glad the emotions and their portrayal worked for you. And the roadie and the quickie were definitely put there for a little lightness in the face of what's a pretty sad chapter, when you think about it, so, yes, you're bang-on again.
I'm glad the emotions and their portrayal worked for you. And the roadie and the quickie were definitely put there for a little lightness in the face of what's a pretty sad chapter, when you think about it, so, yes, you're bang-on again.
spikestussi
09/25/2009 02:39 pm
made me cry, here.
*hands over a box of tissues*
I hope it was a good cry? Thanks for reading :)
I hope it was a good cry? Thanks for reading :)
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