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One Love, One Life by Alexannah 03/06/2011 07:48 am
hee--hee...I just knew she was going to say that it was bigger on the inside!!!!!! I loved the voice of the Dalek. I could actually hear it speaking! I just haven't figured out which doctor it is so I can hear the voice and see the face correctly in my head. Write in some more clues such as he is wearing tennis shoes or has sandy long hair that keep flopping into his face. I know you gave the clue about the coat, but I've only gotten to see the Christmas special with the newest doctor and don't remember what he wore. Tasha 01/14/2010 05:27 am Very Interesting. Looks to be a good crossover piece. I just hope she ends up with Spike. calminthechaos 01/11/2010 07:46 pm Can't wait to see where you're headed with this! Marshmellowed 01/10/2010 09:53 pm Eeeee! Oh so many excited squeels with this. My two favourite fandoms combined in what looks to be a very promising story! Very well written and brilliant premise, please keep it up! Jill y 01/10/2010 05:57 am I just love time travel stories, and I'm really excited about this one! Can't wait to see what you have planned. Great chapter, set up how Buffy is feeling really well, and I liked your Willow contributions a lot, fitting her personality but the mature, older Willow instead of the rambling, too-sweet, too-eager one that a lot of people end up writing. 01/09/2010 11:03 pm I absolutely love Doctor Who, and think using him for Buffy's time-travel is an excellent twist! You showed the Doctor's singular personality very well, and Buffy's feelings are clear and strong. I love how you wrote the Doctor's understanding of Buffy's wish to help someone she lost and Buffy's pain and unhesitating answer to 'when' she would go and then slipped easily into Buffy's awe at TARDIS and the Doctor rolling his eyes. A wonderful chapter. Great mood, flow, characterization, and pacing as we set the scene for our characters. I can't wait to see what your William will be like, and how he might react to an out-of-time and -place Buffy in Victorian London. | |||
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