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West of the Moon, East of the Sun by KnifeEdge
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer, Nights, Dreams
07/10/2010 09:13 pm
This looks like a really interesting story. It's unfortunate for me however, that you chose to do it in first person. I can't read stories in first person perspective, it just bugs me lol. But the plot of the story is a good one so far.
Unfortunate, yes. More unfortunate because there really wasn't a better way to tell this.
I know some people don't dig POV fics--I'm often one of them--but I'd like to hope you won't hold that against it.
If so, no worries. My next fic will be third person, limited. Maybe you'll like that one.
I know some people don't dig POV fics--I'm often one of them--but I'd like to hope you won't hold that against it.
If so, no worries. My next fic will be third person, limited. Maybe you'll like that one.
07/07/2010 03:39 am
To be standing over your broken and bleedin' corpse, of course - yay! a visit from mean Spike. Love it.
I have a great fondness for evil!Spike. :) To me Spike is always at his most fun when he's snarky and soulless. Hopefully you'll find plenty more of that in the rest of this story.
Thanks for the reviews. :) This is my first "Buffy" story, so encouragement of any sort makes me happy.
Thanks for the reviews. :) This is my first "Buffy" story, so encouragement of any sort makes me happy.
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