Okay :D just found your fic and I wanted to say: I love it! You are a great writer. the chapter The Body made me cry even more than the episode! I really like how great you have nailed Buffys Character and how Spike really is trying to be good! Mr. Gordo ... SOOO adorable! The whole idea is so great!

um, can I worship you?  The last two chapters were so well done.  Poignant, and real and just---I had tears in my eyes.  And yeah, so I know some of it is canon, but the details you added, and how you shifted things....we can see Buffy growing and changing from her experiences.  It feels organic and real the way you've written it.   I just really love this fic. 

good stuff. although it would have been cool if she could have hung with spike alittle. i'm sure your saving that for the next chap though. of which. you got till monday to make me happy cuase then ill be gone for three weeks. so i sure do hope the next ones are good. :)

I tried to tell myself that it's just a story about another story, but that didn't stop your word from pulling at my emotions. The last two chapters were painfully beautiful to read.

2 in one day; you're spoiling us.  thanks!
We all need a Mr. Gordo of our own.

Little bits of Buffy, done up like a row of tiny buttons.

You are killing me right here, dude.  Damn.