Thank you for writing this fic, I enjoyed it so, so much.
I have nothing but amazement at your considerable talent! I only discovered this site a few months ago and started by reading Most Read and then going through the alphabet of author names. I won't lie as there have been some really good ones. A couple that I didn't expect could be surpassed but you have!
I have never got into present tense or first person views of storys before but from the moment I started reading this plus with the added bonus of the Spike POV parts, I have read it avidly. A few chapters every night before bedtime. I normally need it to get a little hot and heavy quite quickly but you are actually a fantastic story teller so I didn't even think about if they would get intitmate at any point or not. How you made it seem like I could in my mind's eye be watching a very long episode of BtVs is testament to your skills. I did not need to flick backwards, re-read chapters as I have that kind of mind and a very recollective memory so I just forged ahead and remembered the clues. I used to always watch "Who Dunnits" with my best mate or thriller films and she and I would work out the endings at least half way through the programme/film.
I worked out that it had to be Spike that was Mr Gordo but the bits leading up to it and then how it was revealed in the journal was a master stroke.
I am glad that you have written really recently with your new unfinished story which I haven't started yet. I don't know what view it's in but I'd love to read it when it's complete. Also as you are so good at making Spike seem to noble without a soul, I was wondering if you would do a story all from his POV. I loved it when he was funny in the show and you certainly made me laugh out loud a good few times reading. I don't understand anyone who virtually comes on and starts picking apart someones work which btw yours is the most grammatically correct and spelled story so far. The fact you have a Brit for a Beta probably helped greatly but if I didn't know better I'd have thought you were. The phrases, slang and swearing are how I talk daily (Apart from the C-Word as I call it!)
Anyway, enough waffle from me for today. Just thanks again for creating this amazing, complex, intelligent, interesting and many layered (Like Spike) story. I cannot believe you wrote and completed it in such a short amount of months! I started writing a story which I've only done 7 chapters on in 1996 and then my social life took over and I never went back to it. It's not Spuffy fic, but it was a horror. Maybe one day I might continue. I'd have to go from handwriting to typing it out though!
If you have the time to reply to me briefly to let me know when it is done I would appreciate it. My email address is: bezziemate@gmail.com.
Thank you.
Brit Girl.
This was awesome! I know I'm late to the party, but this was amazing. I have been reading fanfic for a few years now and I'm surprised that I haven't read this one yet. What a gem this story was. I've been staying up late and reading this on my breaks at work! You are an amazing author and I love how you wove canon to work with your story. The narrative never felt rushed or agonizingly slow either. I love, LOVE the way that you write and I'm definitely going to check out your other works. Thank you so much for posting this.
OMG!!!! I loved your story. I really enjoyed getting to see the timeline from Buffy and Spikes perspective. I love the story of Eros and Psyche so I had the impression you were following that idea from the beginning but I had never seen it used in the spuffyverse and I really enjoyed your rendition of it. I also really liked the "don't look' here" spell, it defiinitely made the post it's humourous. Thank you again, I'm currently reading your story "Dust" and hope to see new chapters soon.
The dream deminision was beautiful told and I wish it would have gone just a little bit further. Allowed her to see who he was without having to see his face or hear his voice. But she didn't know the time line, so her patientience was pretty heavy.
I'd have loved to see some comedy of Spike putting those post its all over and just, I dunno, saying "You bloody wankers can't see the post its in front of your face!"
The eplilogue was really nice too. A Slayer and her Vampire may not get the happily, but they'll have the ever after.
I know you said you weren't wanting to do a sequel, but you've created a great fic her. There are so many ways this can go (except giant bug, space ships and spuffy babies ).
I so enjoyed this story, that I hope you write on for you characters. Creating your own usniverse. I think you could do it well. Thank you for writing this. Thank you so much.
I cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this. This story has occupied my every waking moment for days on end, and probably annoyed my husband even more than my usual reading addiction. You (once again) have drawn complex characters, intricate plot and woven a spiritual, magical, lyrical tapestry that kept me coming back.
At first, I felt that there was too much of the original series, and I still feel that way a little bit, however, for someone who had never seen Buffy, this would be fully readable because it is so very careful in its exposition. I think too many stories rely on everyone knowing the canon and the fanon and they take short cuts. There were no short cuts here. Could it have been tighter? Perhaps a little, but I suspect it would also have been a quite different reading experience, and I'm not willing to risk that for a slightly lower word count. This is an epic. It is almost certainly the longest single fan fiction story I've ever read, but it was also one of the most unforgettable. I look forward to what you write next. If you're not sure, you could make a career as a professional writer. If you already are, I hope you are well paid because you deserve it. I'd pay to read your work. It's been a true pleasure.
Peace,
Blue
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Brilliant story, obviously great research. tru to the characters whith wonderful development as the story unfolded. One of the best spuffy I have read.
Thanklyou
I want to say so much and yet I can't. Speechless almost. What a beautiful story.
Thank you for this. Thank you for taking the time.
Also, you buggered up leaving your review. Only reason I know you were being snarky and snotty to me is because I got the whole thing in my email.
Thank you.
With a wonderfully thought out story line, you made the romance between Buffy and Spike seem possible.
And between you and me, I prefer your protagonist, over Glory any day.
Thanks for showing me something fresh for my favorite couple.
Please write more.
I looked to see if you had any more stories and I was shocked you didn't and also kind of disappointed. You have amazing talent, and if you ever published any books I would buy every one simply because your style is so interesting to read. I'm very impressed - and i'm known to be picky.
Definitely keep up writing - you are so talented, and quite frankly I'm a bit jealous. Haha.
It was a fantastic story, written professionally and with great emotions. I enjoyed every single chapter and do hope you're going to write some more Spuffy fanfics. Thanks a lot and praise to you! :)
Best news? That you are working on another story!!
Thank you
Didn't really latch on to the story until part 2-probably because I am more of a Spike reader than Buffy.
Different reading Buffy POV and maybe that was part of it too and the rehashing of Season 5 for a while. You are a talented writer and that kept me reading.
Thank you.
Great storyline, incredible charicterization, exciting fight scenes, well written dialogue...this story absolutely had it all.
Thank you for writing it!
