I never understood why in the show angel never lost his soul when Conner was born, should have his happy moment. Very bad of the writers

I'm a bad rude man for not reviewing this sooner. And by sooner I mean the first time I read this. Allow me to rectify that.
This. Is. Fucking. AWESOME!
The friendship between Tara and Oz is great, something that I always get hooked on as much as everything else that happens in Origins. I love how Dawn is portrayed, and best of all, you brought back Angelus! Any time he gets a smack down by Spike is a golden day in all our lives.

Oooohhhh I love it I love it I love it!!! Just wonderful! I can't wait to read more!

wow...you write the characters from angel's group flawlessly...i've just been watching the show a lot and could totally picture that last scene as it could have happened...and can i just say again i *adore* wesley? especially as "cool, collected leader"? :) great chapter, love :)

4 -- wow that was hot...and dawn having her perfect night...very well written, love, very much enjoyed it :)

3 -- i love the scene with casey and spike...very well done...interested in seeing how buffy and spike react to the new about dawn's origins :) great chapter :)

2 -- if you do oz/tara, i believe that'll be a pairing that i've never seen before...but i can soo see you making it work :) great chapter :)

One -- i love that you brought oz into it, i love oz...him and tara co-existing in the same house should be interesting...looking forward to the chance to read more :)

Chapter Five - Oh this was such an awesome chapter! I absolutly cannot believe Angel lost his soul (actually I always thought that it was rather pathetic he didn't - I much prefer the way you wrote this sweetie to how the show portrayed it) So now Angel is soulless and Wes must protect Connor. Excellant excellant! I love this chapter and this story so much!

Chapter Four - I love how you written Darla - very powerful and moving. The parts with Casey and Dawn were very sweet. Great chapter!

Chapter Three - I loved that Dawn found out she is Spike and Buffy's daughter - I hope those are happy tears and not sad ones for some reason. Brilliant chapter and excellant writing. I am looking foward to seeing what Willow is up to. She is truly to devious for her - and anyone else's own good!

Chapter Two - onward with the quest of rereading and reviewing of this great fiction!

This was a really great chapter - I really enjoyed the Spike and Dawn interaction about her date and the developing Oz and Tara friendship. I feel a bit sorry for Xander - he seems so confused, but he won't let himself accept the truth. Shakes head. Great chapter and beutifully written!

Chapter One - I loved the beginning to the new chapter (I saw that you had some new chapters so I decided to reread this wonderful story.) Chapter one is excellant. I love how Dawn is excited about her new guy, the introduction of Oz, and Darla's pregnancy. Great first chapter sweetie!

Did I read that right? Willow took Angels soul trying put a spell on Spike? That is wicked cool. Hope that Dawn shares her parents 411 with them soon. And who's after the key? This is so good. Can't wait to get caught up.

juyst finished reading the first part of this tale (Origens) all 300+ pages of it(estamated size)

now moved on to the next part.
wishiung this was in book form so I could read it while traveling not just when I am at my desk

Good chapter. Wonder what's going on at the school? Guess I better read on and find out! :)