Unkept by chalkyhands
Chapter: Chapter Two

11/26/2010 11:07 pm
there's no body when a vampire dusts, you know - Buffy should have clocked him for that one  :) 

no_promises
11/14/2010 04:36 pm
this just keeps getting better.  It's funny how easy it is for Angel to completely manipulate Buffy.  I wonder how much Angel had to do with Spike's capture, because he is obviously lying.

no_promises
11/14/2010 04:34 pm
this just keeps getting better.  It's funny how easy it is for Angel to completely manipulate Buffy.  I wonder how much Angel had to do with Spike's capture, because he is obviously lying.

11/14/2010 04:21 am
Very much enjoying this!  Looks like Dawn can cut through the crap better than Buffy.

Curtis
11/07/2010 10:18 pm
I really like where this is going. Keep up the good work.

11/07/2010 10:15 pm
oh excellent follow up - blood stains from the removal of fangs I assume. Fabulous job of evil Angel up to no good,  let's set Dawn on him!
Great writing - roll on the next chapter.

ladycat713
11/07/2010 05:07 pm
Buffy really is clueless where Angel is concerned (though nothing could be as bad as she is in the comics) .I'm wondering if it's Dawn that will end up coming to the rescue.

Sunshine
11/07/2010 04:59 pm
Oh.. please update this soon!

I like where this is going - can we hope for lots of horrors for Spike, being sold to his enemies in that brothel, then Buffy in her best "saving her loved-one"-rage, spectacular revenge and lots of Spuffy loving? It is just what I love, so please, keep it up.

I am just so thrilled to see if Angel is indeed the bad guy, or if he too has been tricked. I hope he is not quilty, just stupid. I am not too fond of Angel-hating fics. But I`ll love this story anyhow. Just please keep writing:)

11/07/2010 12:27 pm
Angel wouldn't lie to her? Yeah - right. Wake up and smell the jealous sneakiness, Buffy!