Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Part 4

11/22/2006 10:59 pm
19 -- okay, so willow's gonna end up on angel's side, isn't she? he's either gonna turn her, or talk down buffy and the others enough to get her on his side with some scheme...sigh...great chapter, but i'm getting worried for them all...

11/22/2006 10:27 pm
18 -- oh i'm really nervous about what's gonna happen when angelus goes after willow...poor buffy, how shaken up she must be, poor girl...hope they all stay safe :)

11/22/2006 10:12 pm
17 -- love how spike and buffy took the revelation about dawn...they're a family...and i have a feeling that's something spike, more than any of them, is going to need right now...i have a feeling that being angelus' target is going to be pretty hard on him... :( great chapter :)

11/22/2006 09:55 pm
16 -- i think buffy's right about giles, isn't she? and you totally chilled me with angel outside the window...man, how scary...i'm startin to get worried for all of them...great chapter :)

11/22/2006 09:21 pm
15 -- that last bit with wes and spike had me a bit confused...is something wrong besides his injuries from the fight? is something wrong with his chip, maybe? they need to get that thing out, right away! great chapter :)

08/17/2006 06:14 pm
Chapter 19 - Oh lovely story I loved the Angel and Willow meeting 0 I wonder if he is going to try and turn her - of course there are also the Huntsmen who want her as well I assume - I wonder who will end up attacking her first. great chapter - very excellant well done - oh and the part about Darla being a potential - brilliant!

08/17/2006 06:13 pm
Chapter 19 - Oh lovely story I loved the Angel and Willow meeting 0 I wonder if he is going to try and turn her - of course there are also the Huntsmen who want her as well I assume - I wonder who will end up attacking her first. great chapter - very excellant well done - oh and the part about Darla being a potential - brilliant!

08/17/2006 05:57 pm
Chapter 18 - lovely chapter - I love Willow's confidence that she can take care of herself, her continued alienation that she is inflicted on herself and Buffy's reaction to tara's news. great chapter!

08/17/2006 05:49 pm
Chapter 17 - Wonderful chapter - I am in your thrall! This was very great. I loved how Dawn blurted out the truth to them - wonderfully emotional. Sigh - happy thought! I love it and can't wait to finish more!

08/17/2006 02:45 pm
Chapter 16 - lovely chapter - Angelus has now entered the play! I loved it - great story! *grin* I hope they take care of the chip soon - it would be to easy for angel to round up some humans to do the dirty work for him. Great!

08/17/2006 02:36 pm
Chapter 15 - I feel so sorry for Anya - you have written her beutifully - her confusion, her inabililty to understand what she is doing is wrong (well nothing your boyfriend is an A**) great chapter!

Verda
06/30/2006 10:53 am
No worries about chapter 16, it was very exciting with Angelus stalking them, making poor Spike take a defensive stand against him, holding Conner no less. Thank you so much for Dawn spilling the beans about her parents. These are awesome chapters to an awesome story. Glad Buffy's open to the fact that she can have a child with Spike. Hope she does after a big wedding.