Unkept by chalkyhands
Chapter: Chapter Four

12/20/2010 03:04 am
Excellent writing!  Reading torture descriptions is always hard and I bet writing it is much harder.  Very gripping. 

Kitty
11/24/2010 01:34 am
I just read this today and I LOVE it so far
eugh - Angel. What a bastard
Can't wait for more :)
xx

11/21/2010 11:50 pm
oh wow - intense   This story has me right on the edge of my seat.  It makes my heart pound.  Thank you for the excitement.
I was kind of hoping Buffy would do more damage to Angel.  Maybe if I'm lucky she still will.  Now I just wonder what happens with the loss of the blood bond, and is that what is causing Spike's lack of response. 

Time of Change
11/21/2010 03:41 pm
Holy crap.  Well written, but I can't stop shaking.  Really horrifying stuff.  Is it too much to hope that Angel will pay?

Tamara
11/20/2010 07:53 pm
I think not dusting Angel will bite Buffy in the butt one way or another.

It's Angel who taught Dru to torture. Lyle shoudl gone after him as well or asked why he was selling out Spike and not Dru.

11/20/2010 07:29 pm
Oh, poor Spike! He'll hate the fact that Buffy saw him like that. I hope Angel gets his comeuppance.....