I thoroughly enjoy your writing.  Because I'm not versed in the comics, I'm bypassing this one (my loss) until I get the opportunity to learn a bit more and it makes sense.  Meanwhile, I'm just sending a message encouraging your writing, as it's always a treat to read. 

Ah - the spuffy stupidity continues.  Good! 

I see Buffy is still the stupidest girl in California.  It's one constant in the Bverse.  I like that you started off this way. 

Interesting start.  I have such a hard time with the comics that I was reluctant to read this, but if anybody can work with the mess that is Season 8, it's you.  I can't wait to see where this is headed, how everyone got where they are and why...and the teeth thing.  That's just strange.  Anyway, I look forward to more.   Thanks for sharing.

gah!  more!
(usually, my reviews are slightly more coherent, but that's the first thought that hit me when I got to the end of this and saw that it's the only chapter...)

interesting start - liked your writing and good interaction between Buffy and Spike, that comfortable but yet uncomfortable in some way interaction, does that make sense? I like the continuation from the comics - flows nicely and Buffy's demeanour seems just right, looking forward to more.

I'm really looking forward to this. Well-written, excellent characterization.