Unkept by chalkyhands
Chapter: Chapter Eleven

02/08/2011 12:49 am
Sheesh, talk about a downer of a chapter. lol. Where's the Spike healing proccess, the dealing with his trauma,..this just seems rather anti-climactic after everything. She brings him home and then nada. They're just going to ignore each other and be all weird now? Very frustrating.

01/31/2011 05:54 am
Her heart burned. . . . mine too     I can feel her pain.
Buffy never has been very good with words, and you have captured the essence of Buffy perfectly.  I hope she can find a way to get through to Spike (he seems to be so broken).  I want more sexy Spuffy, bitey, moments.

01/30/2011 11:31 pm
oof.  this chapter was like a punch in the gut.  Exceelent way to bring us down ofter the last one.  (I"m serious!)  Can't wait to see what's next.

01/30/2011 10:10 pm

oh dear lord, as Giles would say, how well written and how full of angst for our heroes, looking forward to how the talk will go.

Tamara Burks
01/30/2011 09:48 pm

Maybe he's just depressed. He's been through a lot after all.

Love the snark about the sloppy Slayers. Buffy really isn't a good long term leader. The Scoobies were the most she could handle and she wasn't trying to teach them . Look how quickly she gave up on teaching Dawn to fight.

01/30/2011 11:39 am
Yes, sounds as if Buffy can't put off The Talk any longer. Sounds as if it's overdue!