Ami
02/13/2011 10:01 pm

Another good chapter. Will Julie find out Spike's a vamp? Buffy trying to explain what she ansd Spike once were to each other was cute. And I love that no matter what they fight so well together.

I liked this...." And what are you doing with her?Is she yours?"

Spike's eyes shot sideways, only to meet Buffy's own quick glance. They both looked away without acknowledging the eye contact.

"Belongs to herself," Spike said.  Oh our kids.:) They need to Talk, but the dancing around their feelings is so typical. lol

I love the ships and the bugs. I think it's nice that Spike has something thats his and he has his independence too.

Looking forward to more...this is a very enjoyable story. :)

Thank you. I hope you contiue to enjoy it.

mazza
02/13/2011 05:54 pm

I am enjoying this story, I have read all the comics and this follow on fits nicely (not a good enough word!). Spike and Buffy conversations are well written, but oh so denial is still thy middle names. My only quibble is I wasn't keen on the bugship in the comics and still not keen but you are following canon so I can live with it. Looking forward to finding out about the vamps and the not so keen Julie and whether or not she will meet Spike. Good stuff.

I'm glad you're liking it. Sorry about the bugs, but they're part of the story, so....

Euphoria
02/13/2011 12:39 pm
This fic is actually making me want to read those gadawful comics, and thats saying something! I love it so much :D Thank you for writing!
Thank you for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying it.  (not sure if it's a good reason to read the comics, though...)

Jeleyne
02/13/2011 06:15 am
Nice scene with Julie. And Jealous Buffy is always a treat.  “Just when I think she’s not as dumb as she looks….”   Yep. That's our Buffy.  “THE Slayer,” she growled. “Why do I have to keep telling you morons that?”  Maybe because they're morons? Love the running joke about that, and it's good to see Buffy reclaiming her singular status. Re the line Spike quickly wrapped up his conscious burden - you might want to double-check the victim's condition there; since he seems to be unconscious before and after that sentence, I'm guessing he should probably be unconscious in that line, too. As for Spike and Buffy - are those two crazy kids anywhere near realizing that they're going to have to Talk sometime soon?
Thanks! Ah, a perfect example of how my tinkering after the betas have seen the chapters gets me into trouble. Thanks for pointing it out. Yes, is supposed to be UNconscious. *sigh*  
Well, I think they might have a way to go before they get anything settled - it's Spike and Buffy, you know. Two steps forward, one back - even when they aren't dancing. :)

All4Spike
02/13/2011 01:04 am
I just love the easy banter between Buffy & Spike. More please...
Thank you. More as soon as I get it written.